| Reviews for The First |
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  Guest chapter 74 . 4/2 'Aries', not 'Ares'. 'Aries' equals the star-sign of the Ram. 'Ares' equals the Ancient Greek God of War and Bloodshed. |
| Guest chapter 69 . 4/2 And Vinnie's reaction when he does look the word up...? LOL! XD |
| Guest chapter 68 . 4/2 MORE! MORE! MORE! |
| Guest chapter 68 . 4/2 Wait; how would Charley have gotten medical-grade heroin for them? |
| Guest chapter 43 . 4/1 'Loved'? Past tense? |
| Guest chapter 39 . 4/1 More Mythbusters! |
| Guest chapter 36 . 4/1 Actually, Charley's family would be Scottish... |
| Guest chapter 30 . 4/1 Mel Brooks films? |
| Guest chapter 13 . 3/31 LOL! XD |
| Guest chapter 11 . 3/31 Bruce Lee: "Be Like Water, My Friend." |
| Guest chapter 7 . 3/31 Have they ever seen the movie? |
| Guest chapter 2 . 3/31 'Probably had a-lot of experience with her-own father's hair, once-upon-a-time... |
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/31 MORE! |
 The Flyattractor chapter 33 . 2/20 That was fun |
| Miko Vampire chapter 49 . 12/12/2019 Charley should've told them about the other ways of saying f off. The one or two fingered salute, and the under the chin way too. Please update this again ASAP! |
