Still my favourite story on the site, re read this annually, Just wish it had been completed or we atleast got to see the Harry & Aurora pay off.

it will be much less complicated if he was just Harrison with harry memory instead of harry took Harrison body and the reason he have his memory because Harrison was a seer

Ahhhhh I’m rereading this for probably the third time and I would LOVE to see it continued. I don’t know what’s going on in your life right now, but even though I’ve never read the Dresden Files, I think you have melded these worlds so brilliantly, and I desperately want more. Your characters are engaging, plot thrilling, and prose lovely. If you ever decide to come back to this project, you’ll have at least one eager reader.

This was great, the kind of great that makes you not even want to search for something alike because of it0s unlikelyhood of existence.

A bit too much tone whiplash and silly stuff, too crackish to really be immersive.

The attempt at humour should be toned down a tad. Especially those regarding the romantic bit, from the movie reference, to a movie few people would have seen nowadays, and ridiculous blackmail, to the talk about heirs, it just felt flat.

typos:

It's…guardian - Its…guardian

sheer your mind - shear your mind

One thing I noticed was that you kept changing the age of Aiden. Apart from that it is a fantastic read so far.

A truly impressive story looking forward to the next chapter

Geez, this is a TRULY BRILLIANT FIC! I have loved every second of it and hope that you manage to come back to it again at some point as I cannot wait to see what happens next! ;o)

Very well-done! You actually got a couple of tears out of me there, and that's not an easy thing for a writer to do.

Aiden is the most annoying little shit ever. I'd be spanking him until he couldn't sit for a week.

I am really enjoying the depth into the Dresden universe and the inclusion of Elaine as a major character. The story of what happened to Harrison's soul is very interesting to me and I hope it's touched upon soon or at the end of the story. My main complaint with this story is that Harry Potter acts almost exactly like Harry Dresden - full of anger and a suicidal desire for independent from even the thought of someone having power over him. I worry that there isn't enough separation between them and that you're just telling Dresden's story in the body of HP. I look forward to continuing this story.

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next chapter please

the fight was too long in this chapter. it really dragged out. consider making it shorter