I am amazed your story is not higher up in the popularity ladder. While I thought the ending was abrupt (it could easily be because I wanted to continue reading Mikan and Narsume's bickering), I admire the brilliance with which you have navigated this story, especially their conversations! This was my second re-read and I am sure I will come back to this story. Lots of power to you!

Wow this story is amazing! I'm so glad I gave it a shot. You really are a talented writer. I can't believe the two of them were faking it the whole time. I'm glad all of them had happy endings. Naoki should be in jail, scrubbing toilets for the rest of his life! A sorry excuse for a father hmph! You love to write about Mikan getting kidnapped don't u lol. You wrote about Mikan getting kidnapped in Before You Hit The Ground as well. Haha! Anyways, still waiting for your update for Capsize :)

thank you for this story. It was good and original i think. If i were natsume or hotaru, i will start putting tracking devices and hiring bodyguard around mikan. She's been kidnapped way to much. Imagine if she married or engaged to Natsume. Some people are persistent.

I really loved the fanfiction. I wasnt that interested with the plot but when i started to read it more and more i got so attached to the story that i couldnt take my eyes .
Again this story was great i live your ideas

Sincerely NikoNikiLove

I spent the entire day reading this on-and-off! And I totally did not see Luna faking the whole thing coming, nice surprise for us readers! This was an enjoyable read, thank you for writing it!

What the hell, that's the cutest thing ever. XD

"That is for you to know, and me to find out." Exactly what Jascha Heifetz (worlds greatest violinist, he pasted away) quoted!
Ducky-sama, (I am a fan girl XD) it is getting more interesting now! :D

You should make more stories with more chapters! 3
I aloways love them!

I loved it! It was such an awesome story so intriguing. Lets see where to start Mikan was so lucky and brave to be an athlete and every race she did she was in the zone. I kinda wish natsume would be more straightforward lol I also was annoyed by the metaphors and riddles he kept saying lol but anyway I loved it I also love hotaru such an awesome friend kinda wish Luca had a crush on mikan and that another person would have fallen in love with mikan since natsume wasn't as jealous as I hoped he would have been with tsubasa but overall mikan's brave spirit and challenging life made this story a Hollywood must see (if it were a movie though) but its not so its a must read thank you so much for your hard work D

I would write a really long and rambling review to explain to you just how awesomesauce I think this story is, but that would take forever and I want to eat lunch. So, I shall just say this instead. Screw all the other characters in this story, Masaru the cabbie is by far my favorite character. Why? Because even Mikan needs a sassy gay friend. Awesome story, loved it!

Not really fond of sports except the tackles (in football) and the slam dunks (wrestling) but this was pretty intriguing to read.

Your story was awesome.. I really enjoyed reading it the ending was surprising and really funny XD

Kawaii fanfic. The ending shocked me. Im happy for Mikan and Luna too I guess. I know she was acting bitchy but at least she was good at the end and she was faking it. OMG Good plot Cx

So luna's actually a goodie,huh? well, nice story. I'll read some of your other stories