Such a strange lonely tale. It's very well written.

I must admit, I've really grown to like the - languid? - quality of how you write Beachcomber. It's a strange, measured pace that's so fitting to his personality and profession, and quite different from most other authors out there.

And your descriptive details are extremely vivid. This story gave me a shiver trying to imagine the Cybertronian underworld...

this was good. No one's ever done Beachcomber before. I think you got him well.