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I am actually glad you posted the warnings and didn't have their first encounter be an extreme intimate one after painting them as distanced and bordering on slightly irritated with one another at the beginning of the story. There was very intense storytelling as well as fun storytelling so it was perfect for those who want to skip over the 'M' parts and move along with your story, definitely a plus. I rather enjoyed the depictions you made of the characters and how by a few outward signs or descriptions, managed to capture their personalities so well.

Wow, this was so good! Your actually really good when it comes to a lemon haha. I'm doing a kibaxino fanfiction myself and I hope people will likes it as much as I liked this one

I can't what for the epilogue. It was such a nice lemon chapter. *blushes* anyways keep up the good work and you did a great job. I have my own kiba story and a kiba one shot story. Please take a look at them if you like.

That was AMAZING! You have a nack keep writing!

I wish I had something constructive to say. Flawless story.

I loved this. Ev-er-y line, word and how it was so beautifully written. I wish this hadn't ended it made me smile. One day, I hope this specific FanFiction continues. I will look into more of your work, you've just got a fan 3

:) Aww :) That was a great story! :)

Pretty hot damn fic! ;) Great job!

MY GOD!

I almost had an heart atack with this chapter. I loved it. I liked the others too but this one is my favorite.

I really liked it.

I love this two together, they look so cute.

Kisse!

P.S: Sorry if you find any mistakes. Im from another coutry, so its hard to write reviews in english.

A lot of inexperienced girls mistake physical intimacy as a a sure indicator of deeper love.

LMAO a four bedroom house with a master bedroom and huge walk-in closet being called SMALL!

What planet do YOU live on?

ah! no! you HAVE to write an epilogue (OR another chapter...:D) soon! not to be pushy or anything :P lol. it may have been a challenge to you, but it actually turned out really well. Very well. (haha) but not just the lemon, though that was quite amazing, but just the characters and the writing style- amazing! anyways, i hope you can write a more...complete ending sometime. good job! :D

Well done in making the chemistry between Kiba and Ino work out in a believable manner. Kiba and Ino sure make an unusual pairing, but I was looking for something a little bit different and this fic hit the spot quite nicely ;) Can't wait to read the epilogue. Keep up the great work.

and you still say you're not an expert? That was amazing X_X I never knew I'd love the pair, but to hell with it...I do xDD