i read this in about two seconds becuase it's so late where I am right now...but what i actually got ot of the story was pretty cool]

wow , that's really great written s you could think that the characters would actually act this way, great story !

Nicely done. I've often thought that Ino was made to be a stronger character than the series actually let her be. I think this could be an entirely possible outlook for her post-Asuma. Sakura's suspicion is also one she'd likely make (and assuredly be wrong about), as it's fairly reasonable, except for the fact that this is Ino.