Just finished rereading this, it's still my favourite bleach fanfic

"So what if she thrust out her chest a little as she gave her report to her captain"
Hah, I ship it :-)

I don't really enjoy Naruto acting that much of a doormat with a girl.
She can pay her own damn tabs. Naruto should just tell the shop owners to take it up with the one that ate their food.

Why do you want to focus on character we barely care about? Most of us simply skim it anyways?

You're contradicting yourself so much it's physically painful to read this
You're saying Naruto has regained memories but then says he hasn't regained all of them, what can he remember and what can he not remember? Fucking make up your mind
You're saying Naruto can't catch up to Yoruichi but anyone knows that would be complete and utter bullshit to the point it's insulting that you think you can pass NARUTO off as someone who isn't fast enough to match Yoruichi after the training he's received
You're saying that Naruto is weak but has potential, 1 year later he has Bankai and is strong enough to be tested by Aizen who didn't bother to test anyone except Kisuke and Yamamoto, fuck sake man are you stupid?
Make up your god damn fucking mind what you want to do with the story, don't just pump out chapters hoping half makes sense

Seriously? You want us to believe a no name piece of trash could almost kill naruto and his team?
gtfo

Honestly, 99% of your thinking about this character went to trash, this isn’t naruto we’re reading about, he shouldn’t NOT change if his memories come back cause right now he’s not naruto at all, not a single personality trait is from the original naruto

It's a damn shame that this is abandoned, along with your other stories. It's by far one of the better Bleach crossovers that I've come across. While this story will never see an update, I do periodically come back to re-read it again for old times sake. I honestly miss your writing, and I hope you're doing well wherever you are. Thanks for leaving us the stories that you've written, even if they'll never be completed.

update! Please, this story has really good premise and has a great story flow. I hope you decide to finish it.

Did you write chapter 1 to make this seems more mysterious? Who speak? who is that woman? who is the fox? is it kurama? then why he/she want to escape? fuck this shit, i cant understand anything i read :I

i'm sorry but when reading this i could not understand the plot as there is a lot of skipping

SOME GOD OF FLASH HE IS... 10 years after this story was released, i'm commenting and upon thinking of the bullshittery of him losing his memories and other shit you made us put up with... he hasn't even gotten his father's hiraishin yet. I held up as best as I could friend, I really tried... but when you have him getting his butt whipped by Yoruichi is a SPEED contest, that's where this goes down the drain for me.

This is good stuff. Please update.

Type your review story is boring and stupid I can't understand it d person who wrote did u read wat u write it is very stupid

bloody brilliant