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   Fenris Jin chapter 1 . 7/25/2012 Wow, pony rides? I would have pegged them on the roller coaster.. XD Anyway, it always seems unfair that Sasuke gets upset over something Hinata technically didn't do, like the very fact that she didn't really turn him down, since he technically didn't confess. Bastard.. XP |
| lalaland chapter 1 . 7/8/2009 Well, it wasn't bad...quite interesting, actually. But I do agree that it's too long for a one-shot, and too short to be a story all together. Not bad. Thanks for writing! |
| lksdjflaksdjflkasdflkajsdflka chapter 1 . 5/25/2009 I love it! It's really good! *sighs* If only real love was like that... |
| smooth.stutter chapter 1 . 5/3/2008 Ohohoh:) I love long one-shots; most especially this one (: x |
| CobaltHeart chapter 1 . 4/22/2008 I like the end 'How am I gonna tell father' was my favorite part. This was great oneshot, very emotional. |
| rallybabe89 chapter 1 . 4/21/2008 12 times and such a lovely one-shot. long but so cute and beautiful |
| Ms.Naruto-Fan chapter 1 . 4/21/2008 Aw, so cute |
| You Light The Sky chapter 1 . 4/11/2008 So cute! One of my favourite oneshots ever! I love how you got team 7 to come to Hinata's cafe for help and guidance, that is so cute! and its' so clear that Sasuke likes her too ;) |
| princess-oro chapter 1 . 4/8/2008 It's cute. When I first read it, it all feels so complicated but actually, it's so simply sweet. I like it :) |
| eishi chapter 1 . 4/8/2008 This has a nice consept and cute characterisation, but I'm afraid your grammar is below average. Please consider finding a beta reader - it would really save you the time of correcting mistakes and make your stories instantly better. (There were some continous mistakes, especially with to quotation marks. E.g. "'Don’t bother.' Naruto coldly retorted." - "'Don’t bother,' Naruto coldly retorted."; "'Hyuuga are you going o leave?' He questioned." - "'Hyuuga, are you going to leave?' he questioned.") I have nothing to say about the plot itself; it was nicely handled, even if I myself find it unnecessary to state where the "flashbacks" are. The readers should be clever enough to figure that out themselves. :P I hope you don't find this insulting; I'm merely trying to help! :) Keep on writing! |
| Re-L-sama chapter 1 . 4/7/2008 AW! That was so cute! Good Job! _ |
| HeartBrokenHinata chapter 1 . 4/7/2008 AAW i love it |
| MyPsychosomaticEpiphany94 chapter 1 . 4/7/2008 Wow. Just, wow. You know that growling sound in the background? Yeah, that's my jealousy. SCREW YOU FOR HAVING SUCH GOOD FANFICTION! |
