holy hell! I am so glad that I decided to dig through the old archives of AkuRoku fanfiction this morning, because my actions led me to your story. I know it has been... 3 years since you worked on it... so I know it is unlikely that it will be finished... but I want you to know that I REALLY love this story. Not only is the plot good~I like your character definition. Also, way to totally just leave it with a major cliff hanger! If you DO decide to continue this story... know that I will be one of the first to read the new chapter. ) I hope you continue to write; you are very talented. )

I have but one comment for Axel:

Oh dear.

AND I NOTICED SOMETHING, OH EM GEE. Although I bet everyone's noticed by now. :B

xD That last line was the best. I can't wait to read more of this story.

I feel kind of stupid, not sora with an x, but roxas. Welp, there was my blast of not-smartness.

xD Holy crud. Axel made me laugh so hard. And x-a-r-o-s...i.e. Sora-x?

aw

poor axel/roxas!

haha watch that boy be roxas

omg i would laugh so hard _

OMG

IT IS ROXAS, ISN'T IT!

THAT'S WHY HE KNEW WHERE TO KISS HIM, (left ear LOL)

OMG

I FEEL SO SMART NOW!

AND THAT'S WHY HE LOOKS LIKE ROXAS

AND LIKES SEA-SALT ICE CREAM

AND IS RELATED TO NAMINE!

wow

this is AWESOME

D

Update soon!

Hahaha, X-A-R-O-S, is a R-O-X-A-S anagram. I'm assuming that it is completely and brilliantly intentional. If Xaros is is Roxas, though, Axel is somewhat of a moron; I mean, wouldn't he be able to recognize someone he was that close with? Especially if they had sex and all...

::fangasm::

Great chapter

Ooh, wow, I just have to say that I love your particular brand of writing. There's something so... risque about it. Or maybe that's just the story. Anyway's... I loved this chapter. Gotta love the French (even though, I have to admit, I stumbled a few times on it. Curse my inability to speak it even after 8 years of the dang language) and how naughty Xaros is.

I am so intrigued about who that person at the end was. It seems a little too obvious for it to be Xaros, but I can't really think of anyone else that was near him. Then again, it could be someone else. And, I wonder who his cousin is. The only girl that I remember with hair like that was Fuu and I don't think it was purple, I think it was silver blue. Then again, it could be someone that doesn't matter to the plot.

I just keep getting this feeling that Roxas is Xaros and is trying to trick him. I just can't figure out why. Or maybe, it's just coincidence how much they look alike and they're really not the same person or even from the same family. Hmm... questions.

Well, it's not as long as the first chapter, but I don't really mind how long a chapter is. I just like the chapters. Period. Keep up the good work and I can't wait until the next chapter. No pressure, though. I'm sure you're busy.

Loves,

wow this is getting so good!

i luv it how u have long chapters

these days most writers make their stories

so short along w/ short chapters

but as i was saying your story rox like roxas!

lol

you know, i can't believe it took me 2 chapters to realise Xaros was just Roxas jumbled up...

but otherwise great chapter!

I only have one thing to say. I FREAKING LOVE YOU! Alright, more than one thing, but whatever, you get a long review. I had so many fangirl moments while reading this chapter that I was forced to admit it, I'm a fangirl of the French language. Fitting considering I just changed my major to French and English, I'm gonna be a French teacher. You're grammar is wonderful, all the other fics I've seen completely destroy French grammar, probably use an online translator rather than actually study it. And the story is wonderful too. I love Xaros, he's awesome. His character is so intriguing and I love that you were able to write him so his accent shows in dialogue. That's hard to do. Axel is great as well, I love his inner conflict with the fact that he's being so easily seduced but still has feeling for Roxas. Great job and can't wait for the next chapter.

Oh my, this story seems like it's heading for a metaphorical car crash. I still love it though. And I have some ideas about the lovely "Xaros"...

Aie! I'm hooked! Please update soon because I love this! ::fangasm::

I love the french culture you added in here. I've taken four years of french, but I'm not all that good with the language though. And I'm lovin' this foxy lil' Roxas (potental) look-alike. I eagerly anticipate your next chapter with some more yummyness :D

Bow

P.S I nearly loled my arse off at the "Xeros" thing. It worked quite well.

whoa! this is actually really good! i'm glad i started to read it!