I love this so much. The transitions between past and present was perfect, hardly anyone is able to do it that great

Wonderful! Absolutely wonderful!

Good. Write more, not of this story but just keep writing.

Well done. I like when bits of the show are incorporated, but twisted to be shown in a different light. This was a great rendition. :D And the smut didn't hurt either!

Best Simon/Jayme fic yet! love it!

I'm curious, does this mean that Simon knows Jayne betrayed them? I enjoyed the fic, especially the excerpts from the episode, and I'd have loved to see this actually happen.

Holy crap that was a great, mind-blowing read. This is so being added to my C2 _

Yay, happily ever after for my favorite couple. -

I'm drooling over here. Completely and undeniably sexy. (And why oh WHY is this not on your profile on the y!Gallery?) Anyway, loved it loved it loved it. You're officially my Jayne/Simon inspiration.

That was really good! I always hated that they showed Jayne as not caring! And this showed that he has a heart without making him OOC! Really good!

yay! first, jayne and simon - very hot. second, i think you did a great job of getting simon and jayne past ariel, it seems like something that simon could never really forgive jayne for, but i think you did an awesome job. :) plus... the sex was super hot. hehe. thank you for the fic! *HUG*

absolutely brilliant stuff :) well written, love the uotes and backstory and the spin you put on ariel :) fabulous work

Aww, sweet! It's kinda scary how well Jayne and Simon work.