Great story it seemed a little rushed but still great

Awesome

Sigue

Thank you! Why do so many people think that Naruto's wiskers are because of Kyuubi!? If people would look up Bolt Uzumaki (Naruto's son) they would see that he has wiskers as well but NO KYUUBI! So it must be some sort of birth mark or something akin to that. Thank you and well done by the way, bit confusing at the end though.

your story is bad
so you should be sad
i am mad
it sucks like none ever had

i hope your serial raped for years in captivity by a fat pig who loves raping guys like you die you worthless fucking cumdump

Nice

Impossible. 99% of Konoha actually respects Naruto? That would never happen, people who were socialised all their lives to hate him, and lost at least one of their loved ones to the Kyuubi would never ever respect, most would be grudging acceptence, even then the majority would still hate Naruto. And seriously the remaining 1% are the three whom attempting to rape Nariko? Are you saying that that Konoha is composed of 300 people? How on earth is does that make Konoha the most powerful?

Oh and on the reminder, the incest was quite dull, poorly portrayed emotions and actions.

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really great one shot

Thank you, it was a good XD.

Uhm.. where the Fuck did Kyuubi come from...? you never mentioned her beong out of the seal... and then right after she was there in bed with them?... and also they found out about her existense when she was 12... and found her a bit later. and now this part played when he was 13... tsunade wasent even in the villige at that time... anyway i kinda enjoyed it anyway... would have wanted her to go and kiss him first. with him dumbfonded. and not really confess like he did.

nce story! :D :-bd

if only real life fights had dragonball z music in the background the world would be a better place

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me:NO! THIS SONG HAS TAKEN OVER FANFICTION!

but DAMN!wata story

make more will ya!