is this getting a sequel? i already finished all your fics and i am left hanging in 3 of them, i love the way you are going about this take on naruto and his links to the people around it.

should named the bridge the great naruhina bridge. would have been hilarious since hinata's face would light up like a christmas tree

You were so good until you brought real-world tech into it. Why? Just stop.

Can I get the naruhina chapters? Some please

So glad naruto passed instead of being tricked by Mizuki! But, I have a feeling this won’t be the last we see Mizuki

I really do not know what is worse... that your MC is idiot who actually WANT to be killed and would not even try to avoid it OR that you as many of these so called IDIOTs write about "earning trust of village". I mean come on... You said your Naruto would be more mature... But trying to be a "pet" for village that abuse him and hate him... Yeah really mature...

EVERY damn story where Naruto decides that he just "deserve" to die is PAHTETIC...

This sucks nothing has changed

You know what Kiba? You try a jonin level technique while strengthening said technique so it's more durable and then tell him his Chakra control isn't good enough

Great job

... Naruto doesn't blame the villagers for years of abuse ? Wow that's dumb.
I'm out

Exceptionaly good story right up to the moment when he decided not to give up on Sasuke. While I like the fact that he is stronger, smarter and mature in general, at the end of the day you still destroyed his image with his stupid obsession over Sasuke.

I just read the moment when Naruto try to convince Haku that he is throwing his life away for an evil person who does not deserve it.
It's kinda ironic don't you think ? To hear that from the one who wants to protect a village that despise him.

I know this story was written years ago but I can't believe it. I had high hope for this story but now it's just another idiot Naruto story. You made the Sasuke situation even worse than cannon, because he cared about them much more. He bonded with them and at the end done worse things than cannon. And even tho he still has temper your Naruto is different too, I can't believe this Naruto would be like this. At the valley of the end maybe yeah it was a moment's hesitation that I can accept. But after? He was a way worse traitor than in cannon, he proved it with his actions. And Sakura blaming Naruto, and Naruto blaming himself for not telling Sasuke? He didn't deserve it and even Naruto told him about it he would still fell jealous it wouldn't matter. He should've decided to kill or arrest Sasuke and stop trusting Sakura as a friend. Some friend yeah, revealing your friend's secret to a traitor who is about to defect. Man I was furious after this chapter.

This was good but I kinda wish the stuff with Sasuke had turned out different but I wish there was more