Is this a Anko x Naruto? If so I want to read it dattebayo! Cause the plot is nice.

Hiruzen

Sasuke Sarutobi is the father of Hiruzen

I will admit that I shouldn't have left this story for as long as I did. it is very enjoyable

you ruined a perfectly good book by adding sasuke to the team

why does he keep complaining about Edwards memories after he does things when he could avoid it you are making him a clone of edward.

I quit. Can't give a shit. Anymore. I'm a poet and I know it.

Yep, you pulled a Kishimoto, and yes, that's not a complement.

I know you were shooting for smart up to intelligent, instead you hit the annoyingly high (over 9000) Kishimoto levels of killing your own story in the bulls-eye with more accuracy then Tenten on Meth. This plot-twist didn't and doesn't need to exist except to stroke your very, very small plot erection that is doomed to become flaccid and impotent before the end of this story. No wonder you quit writing, you probably killed yourself.

"I am not kissing you", mwhahaa Classic! Even better then the 'fan girl' line!

This is so unprofessional. Naruto could have already helped capture Kabuto if he didn't have to deal with those women. Troublesome

When the villain gets away just because the writer wants it so. If you wanted to do that you should have established that Naruto is weaker than what you made him to be. Not this bull about being overconfident.

I wish I could see a fic where the action and adventure is so well done that the author won't need sex, innuendo and coupling to liven it up.

I wish writers such as you can be creative enough to think of ways for Naruto to keep information to himself. It's disappointing to read fics such as this where you're too lazy to do so

loved this