Hopefully we get a update soon, I did read your profile...but...the last time it was updated was 2010 so *shrugs* cliffhanger of all cliffhangers though. Great story, I honestly think that everything makes sense, (even if some people in the comments don’t agree) can’t wait for more. If we get more...WE CAN’T LOSE HOPE! DEMISE OF THE CARROT! HOORAY! Poor Akael though...well this comment was a rollercoaster...

-MidnightDawn

It never fails to amuse me when writers try to light-wash the Dark in these fics. It's usually attempted by villainizing Dumbledore while making the dark faction oh so reasonable and pro-muggle-borns (Granger, in particular).

Lily Evans was hired to teach charms at Durmstrang, the school that doesn't accept muggle-borns as students? Really? And out of all the teachers and the Highmaster, you expect readers to buy that Lily the muggle-born was the one chosen to represent Durmstrang while at Hogwarts?

And then, and then! she loudly instructs her son (the assassin who's supposed to stay stealthy in this whole operation) to join her in the headmaster's office after getting his ride settled. Yeah, that's flying under the radar, for sure. Old Dumbles won't suspect a thing.

It's "thank you" not "Thankyou"

I truly do not understand what is worng with some authors, one chapter you build the MC a as great and powerfull assassin, and the next he is weaker than a first year.

Please continue!

Hey I know you made this fic a long time ago and I don't know if you will get this, but I'm sorry some on sent that to you(your author note at the time) I love your writing. From what I know of you from you author notes seems like a pleasant person. I personally thought that that scene might have very hard to write. You expressed that and laid out a very nice reasoning for that scene. Anyways that was my thoughts I just felt like I needed to say them.
Bye

Can u plz update when u can
This is for chapter 22
I love this book

So Grey Shadow, and infamous master assassin that you conjured, can apparently slip right under the noses of vampires and has very powerful magic, keeps getting caught unaware but none other than... Ron Weasley...

I know I’m not far into the fic yet but this is very frustrating

and what about the supposed protection ring given to him by the Assassin's Guild?

i find it completely unfathomable how Harry is toted as an assassin capable of wandless magic,etc but still kept getting hurt by Ron.

Countdown to Ronald Bilius Weasley's Demise- Three Chapters Ah, come on! This has got to be the most monumental cliffie in the entire history of cliffies. Please?

" Harry sounds like he's got…um, schizophrenia?" or maybe access to one honking time turner...

You might want to look into the Italian colonial possessions in Africa in the 1930's-Libya, Somaliland, Ethopia, and Eritrea; dark coloration and Italian in one swoop.

Gah! Your story is has been amazing to read. You are such a talented author and I am deeply saddened that you haven't completed it. I hope you come back to and to compete it because I need to know what happens to Harry and his pack!

NOOOOOOOOOO! I quite liked the plot of this story. It's such a shame that this hasn't been...what? updated since 2008?! Please! finish this fic. It's too good to be abandoned like this