Gah, this is so good! It's everything I didn't know I was looking for. Shame it'll never be finished...

oo this is super intriguing! I really hope you get the chance to continue it!

I know it’s been years since u last updated but I was wondering if you planned on writing more of this story because I’ve got to say it’s one of my favourites and i will be sooo sad if it’s abandoned lol please write more

Diana-
It's been a few years. I've read your fan fiction and loved it. The plot is great and the characters aren't OOC. Please update soon! Though it been 4 years since you have.
Artemis

you should continue writing this if u can. i would love to read what happens after :)

interesting concept

I've waited 2 years for an update.

not cool.

really not cool.

x

the destcriptive words you used where great, tieing the story together perfectly.

and the whole idea of what's going on is very origenal.

all in all nice job.

YOU. MUST. UPDATE. In this story, you have packed in just about everything I could ever want in a good, nay, excellent YGO fanfiction. You have characterization that most authors can only dream of. You take the underutilized magic of the Millennium Items make it a key point in the story. You give us a situation where Yugi and Yami have separate bodies AND the rest of the gang is there to see it. And last, but certainly not least, there is no ROMANCE. You know the last time I read a decent fanfic that didn't have at least a hint of romance in it? NEVER. I am officially sick of romance stories.

In short, I WANT MORE. Please, for the love of all that is holy in this world, update soon!

Your Bakura is deliciously devious. M. Bet he did some things to Kaiba's unconscious body too...I mean

F you. You and your amazing ass characterization of Se- er, Kaiba.

Joey's so...so...gangsta here. I can't even. And things haven't even gotten particularly exciting yet.

Not that I didn't already have an inkling about it, but Kaiba has a real goddamn boner for victory in children's card games. Jesus christ.

AWAY I GO TO THE NEXT CHAPTER

I find this story really interesting and I hope your still continuing it. It has great potential and if you give up on it I'll have to hunt you down and send you off to the Shadow Realm. Other than that hope life's going well and so is your writing. :)

Holy shit! This story is really good. It could have been a part of the actually show. And it's so hard to make a good dream sequence. I like that the first you see of Kaiba's mind is a facade. I'm looking forward to see what the rest of Kaiba's mind is like.

Wow, I'm really enjoying this fic! You have a great writing style, you write enough description of actions and places etc to add interest and to keep everything flowing smoothly. You have everyone in character, too- I can't stand reading fics where the characters are OOC! And of course, the plot is verry intriguing too! I'm looking forward to reading more soon!

I am so incredibly excited to see where this fic goes. :D Keep writing, this is amazing! *does a happy dance*