Amazing! :D

That was beautiful, man ;_;

there is so much beauty in this little story and i am writing this review 8 years after this has been posted but it deserves as much recognition as possible.

i adore the style of writing in this piece, how it follows emotions rather than thought, and emotions are messy and they overlap and one smile or one tear can lead to a new world and this story was just so, so, so, human and so, so, so beautiful.

i know i'm late to the party, but thank you so much for this wonderful piece of work.

This is sweet and sad, and I love, love the writing style. Really good fic.

couldnt say anything. i do wish masashi kishimoto will make sakura falls in kiba *broke hearts*

So I totally understood kinda the reason for why you wrote this fic this way (because for some reason people think its due to an inability to write properly even though you said you wrote it like this purposely kinda) and I really love it. like really really love it. The way this was written (purposely i'm assuming), is absolutely perfect with how it flowed and came out. The whole "I know you wrote this a long time ago so..." is totally invalid since you obviously don't write like this but I just, sorry, ranting, but I love this so much.

This is a really cute story and I loved it, but I think you should try to keep your sentences shorter. They are a bit long, however this has been written a long time ago so you've probably improved by now :P

Adorable! (:

I know you wrote this forever ago, but it's just about the cutest thing I've ever read. Ever. It's adorable.

Very gentle and warm!

I like the way you wrote this because it says that you are expanding as an author. Is it a stream of consciousness kind of thing? I would say you should refine it a little so it flows more, but that's all I would say about it. I kind of like how you aged him too, you would make him more mature sounding as he got older which reminds me of The portrait of and artist a young man.

Beautiful! It ties very well into canon and contains all the little whatsits of boys and girls growing up, especially in this case. It shows a kind of innocence that hasn't been lost over the years and, to sum it all up, it's completely fantastic.

ADORABLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE.

Whenever I'm upset or bored, I love reading your stories. They're always like a breath of fresh air. Especially the KibaSaku ones, because there aren't many of them, and yours are written brilliantly andand-

OMG, THIS IS MY NEW FAVORITE ONE-SHOT!

You made Sakura and Kiba so innocent, lovable, and like they were practically MADE for each other -which they kinda are- and I'm in love with this. I could, legit, feel the love and emotions radiating from the words.

Splendid job, Annie. Seriously, your stories are great!

OH AUTHOR OF THIS REALLY HEARTWARMING STORY THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS IT WARMED MY INSIDES IN A GOOD YOU!

Gorgeous! The style was a little difficult to get used to at first, but once I got situated, it had a very nice flow. Love this pairing! I'm not huge Kiba/Sakura fan, but I love to read a good piece. :)