| Reviews for The Forever Land |
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   Kakkaron chapter 1 . 3/15/2013 Please add more chapters I really do enjoy this, it is amazing, I have read it more than five times hoping there are more chapters... Pleas consider this. |
| PrincessKakkaron chapter 6 . 3/15/2013 Please update and put more chapters! I've read this story a bunch of times in hopes of new chapters. |
| Jhyena Aj Jax chapter 6 . 7/27/2012 intresting story if you have the time please continue it :) I love the tanning session/slash bonding those three had lol |
| Jhyena Aj Jax chapter 4 . 7/27/2012 lol poor zarbon I always wondered how it felt to rid those things |
| yamina-chan chapter 6 . 7/29/2011 Ah crap. Once again I stumble accros a story that turns out to be interesting but stops right when you start to really get into it. And once again, it doesn't look like it's going to be continued anytime soon. Anyway, I really like what you have here so far. I admit that Zarbon isn't really my fafourite character, yet I can't deny that I find this story really good so far. That's the power of good writing skills I would like to see more of this. It's the kind of story that is not written about that often and that has something unice and memorable. The kind of story that we need more. |
| PrincessDiMimi chapter 6 . 7/20/2011 This would have been great if it were completed! Ah welll...nice job on what IS complete. |
| Tabby J Skylark chapter 6 . 9/3/2010 I like this! I find it rather interesting and inventive. And I'm so glad Jeice was picked for the mission, haha. I share many of your notions about their scary enslavement under Freeza and how they'd love to escape if they somehow could risk it. It's great to see serious Zarbon interacting with the boys. I wish I'd captured it better myself! ... Oh, speaking of which, I've posted again, btw. |
| The Darkest wizard chapter 6 . 8/1/2009 This is a fantastic story! Please update soon! |
| The Darkest wizard chapter 4 . 8/1/2009 This is a great story! Please update soon! |
| Shinu chapter 6 . 6/6/2008 ...You are still writing, right? I really hope so since I find this fic truly interesting. |
| DBZ chapter 6 . 4/27/2008 Cool chapter. You're a good writer. |
| Rummi chapter 5 . 4/20/2008 This is pretty good. Please update. |
| Janelynn chapter 4 . 4/8/2008 Poor Zarbon. He was made to suffer. Cool update. |
| Janelynn chapter 3 . 4/7/2008 The Dance of Early Morning Briefings? That's hilarious. Dodoria is a pink ogre? Never could figure what that thing was, but ogre fits him. Good dialogue. I like your writing. Please update soon. |
| Karete-chan chapter 2 . 4/6/2008 Like I said back at Strike-a-Pose - Thank god for writers who can write. I like this so far, it looks interesting AND different. Just wish the chapters were a bit Keep it up. |
