THAT is an awesome piece of firefly fanfiction :) very well done, I love it!

Great job on their characterizations and I loved their interactions. Well done.

Very nice. It's something I can certainly imagine Mal doing. In fact, I'm sure of it.

I love stories with Simon and Mal. It's always a fantastic mix of their personalities constantly clashing, but underneath it all, they're so much more similar than either of them would admit :)

lovely! It is terrible of me, but I do like it when poor Simon gets stuck in threatening situations. And he is brave, just in a far different way to the others.

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I can't really think of anything else to say about this story. All the characters are perfect, the story is believable and it's generally really great. No crit I can think of.

OK, so I could definitely see something like that happening. I like how you wrote Simon; not too brave, not too bold, but SERIOUSLY brilliant. Great job!

Ah, our wonderful captain with the martyr complex. We wouldn't have him any other way, but a man's gotta eat. Very nice flip-flop of responsibilities here, and for believable reasons. *Great* Mal voice, especially the threats to Simon. In short, *squee!*

*wild applause*

You've captured Mal's "voice" wonderfully... his odd semi-archaic dialect always throws me a bit when I'm trying to write 'Firefly'. You nailed it!

I love this story to pieces! *happy fan-flailing*

-Lothi