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nonhalema chapter 4 . 5/21/2009 Loved it |
tanilc chapter 4 . 4/27/2009 i have read most of your stories since i came across them a few days ago, but i have to say that this has been one of my favorites. I really liked how they were able to come together in the end, i wish it had been longer. i would love to read about taylor and ryan after the end of the show. |
BehindMyBlueEyes chapter 4 . 12/16/2008 Aww, the perfect ending to our smutty story. Taylor's been jonesing for Ryan the whole time, she is the perfect girlfriend Ryan! Hot hot sex, of course! One of my favorite parts was that Ryan was totally jonesing for Taylor and he didn't know it. He even called out Taylor's name when he was with another girl, I'm assuming anyway. A happy ending for all us Townwood-ers! This entire story was amazing, I'm gonna miss it! I would love a sequel where everyone finds out! Best lines: "He almost felt bad for jerking off to the memory of her. Almost." “Can we tell everyone but Seth?” |
BehindMyBlueEyes chapter 3 . 12/16/2008 This chapter was great! Ryan on the plane was hysterical! Seth and Summer bickering, too great! Marissa still not understanding Ryan was great! Stupid Ryan thinking about breaking up with Taylor, knew that wasn't going to work! Taylor being in charge of Ryan during sex, freaking HOT! I loved it! Best line "We can do a lot in a month" Hot, seriously hot and great chapter! |
BehindMyBlueEyes chapter 2 . 12/16/2008 So cute, the fact that Taylor was helping him was too great. And I loved that they both forgot about having sex, they were having fun just talking. Ryan tying up Taylor was too hot! She was even speaking in tongues! I loved that Taylor told Ryan to get over his guilt thing, it's about time someone told him that! Great, hot chapter! |
BehindMyBlueEyes chapter 1 . 12/16/2008 That was awesome! I love that Taylor makes Ryan laugh, after 2.5 years with drama bitch he could use it. Ryan thinking that Taylor looked hot at the prom was great! I love that Ryan was so surprised at Taylor not being disgusted by him talking about spanking it, and that she is the one that started the sex. Ryan comparing Taylor to his past partners and her being the best was too great! I loved the hot sex in the limo too of course! Best line “Unless..you wanted to keep them as a trophy or something.” That was too funny! I loved this chapter! |
AngelicMermaid chapter 4 . 8/18/2008 ah i love this one, the variety of places and the time shifts was gr8, there love life didnt follow the same pattern as most other ppl would, it was gr8 keep up the good work hunni, and take your time with that fic idea, it deserves to b more than a one shot, so when you get chance whenever that is give it the attention it deserves, i feel she'd be a foreign language teacher and that he's not good at it lol, x |
Azrael38 chapter 4 . 8/7/2008 I forgot how much I missed this story. I can't believe that Taylor, with her ability to read Ryan, never picked up on his wanting to be with her. He asked her to stay the night, he was always grumpy when he thought about her leaving him or him leaving her. I think she should have picked up on that. Oh well. Still a very well written story that I am sorry is over. Great job, as always. AZ |
Ansy Pansy aka Panz chapter 4 . 8/7/2008 aw brilliant final chapter and great ending totally real |
Ansy Pansy aka Panz chapter 3 . 8/7/2008 oh no only one more! :-( this was fab too, you write really well |
Ansy Pansy aka Panz chapter 2 . 8/7/2008 oh great second chapter totally up to par |
Ansy Pansy aka Panz chapter 1 . 8/7/2008 wow so hot but with a great story around it, really well written lead up. The characters were really well done. One tiny thing...I know they were horny as hell but would you really get it on in a limo where someone had just been sick? lol Looking forward to more |
krisz chapter 4 . 8/7/2008 Fabulous ending to a great series! Just perfect ending to this having them get together. Loved all of the comments about Seth. LOL. I also liked Ryan telling her what he wants. My favorite line though I think is "It’s not like he wasn’t used to sacrificing sex for talking – his past girlfriends had kept him quite trained in that department." Thanks for this great series! Loved each chapter, but I think this one was my favorite. Very nicely done having them get together. So very Taylor to have liked him for a long time and Ryan to be clueless. |
ObsessedRomantic chapter 4 . 8/6/2008 Yay! All in All, not a bad series (teehee). Okay, not as smutty as the others, but still wonderful. I liked the plot, I liked the the way the plot got resolved. So choice! I like the idea of him making it up to her. He should, the big dummy. I mean, what did he think had happened with that girl from his comp class? Duh. SOmetimes, the boy ain't too bright. Best line? 'can we tell every but Seth?' HA! Methinks his brother will torture him for YEARS over this. Great finish to a great story. loved it! YOu are awesome and rock at getting the characters right but still making it differenct and wonderfully smutty. :P |
Samala90 chapter 4 . 8/6/2008 WOW! What a great ending to this nice little dirty fic! Ryan asking sexual favors in return- that's one I don't think he'd ever ask anyone but Taylor...! And he finally asked her out! Yay! And she'd had a thing for him forver, DUH Ryan- he can be soo blind sometimes. I've loved this story all the way through, and this was just the perfect end to it! :) |