just wanted to say this is one my favorite L/OC fanfics. i think your oc is so beautiful and unique and the writing is amazing. i don’t know where you are or if you’re still writing but know that this story is well loved! thanks for publishing it. - sandy

... wow. I know yuko has a good reason for it but... saving one person just so a serial killer can continue killing...

Thank you so much for posting this! I loved it to pieces and will probably come back to it every now because it's THAT good. I really appreciate this because it gives me some peace of mind at least haha :)

It was beautiful, the entire thing. Thank you for this monumental contribution to the world.

What do you like better, the anime or the manga?

Keep giving us L and Yumi fluff! Thank you!

Hurry up with da fluff

I am no where near finished with this, nut I have grown so close to Yumi. She had better get together with L. She deserves it.

I loved how Yumi just sat on L during the entire time that she talked to Naomi. That was hilarious. The sign of true best friends. Anyways, I really like your story. I know that it's 2018 when I'm writing this post, and it was 2008 when you wrote the story. However, I believe this comes to prove that good literature is timeless and unfading. No matter what time it is, you can always enjoy the work as if you were reading it the second it was released. I'm only on chapter 24. It makes me extremely happy that there are so many chapters to this story. Most fanfictions that I read are only 10-15 chapters. Then there are those people who write one-shots. Sometimes the story could really go somewhere, but the person sums it up in a short, unsatisfying chapter. Anyways, I can't believe I took this long writing a review instead of going on to the next chapter. Can't wait to read the next one. Thank you, and may fans of Death Note forever continue to write fanfics about their heroes.

Was the drawing the first idea that she forgot when L interrupted her? Any ways, I love L's 10th birthday. It was cool.

Cool

This story is really good and I liked Yumi a lot! The ending was really satisfying as well.

I cant do this omfgosh. Im dying here I cant freaking breath lmfao. Girl UR NOT DREAMING ANYMORE! Im having the worst cringe in history over here.

Awesome series! Your really talented. Easily one of my favorite series!

Lol.

True.

He must be fuming inside.