I put this on alert back in 2009. I think it's a pity you qhaven't updated as I've enjoyed reading it again. Life happens, but you ever get the urge, you sld continue!

Chapter 6:

It is not possible for funerals to be so late there in the first week I would know. Im weird like that. Oh and mwa ha ha ha I had to do that for far too long. Get an editor. You need it.

Please update soon as I am enjoying the story.

So glad to get another chapter after so long. I understand the crazyness of Uni, though so it's all good. Glad to see you've returned and I can't wait for the next chapter.

Interesting chapter. Luna and Hermione had strong, "recognizable" voices - i.e, we could know who their characters were - but the boy letters were a bit generic. Also, some spelling issues - "breath" instead of "breathe", stuff like that. All in all, a decent chapter, but having a second pair of eyes review it before posting might be a good thing.

A letter from Malfoy to his mum would have been very interesting indeed - hint, hint.

-Steve

Well, so far I am enjoying the story. Every once in a while as I sift through tons of garbage, I come across a gem.

Your keeping the story down to earth and as canon as you can. While some chapters could maybe been expounded a bit more, real life gets in the way of having the time to be creative. But keep at it, your writing is excellent. Keep it logical as you have been doing. Scotland Yard would not make an 18 year old head of the organization or any department, no matter what heroic deeds he has done.

Your sex scenes were sensual, without being pornographic. Good job on those. You highlighted the fact they are teenagers with no experience and fumbled around a lot.

Overall I give you an Outstanding. Will be looking forward to reading more as your able to post.

Gaffer

very good, i never thought about the luna/george relationship but its actually very good, well done carry on :)

nice update though i was a little worried about what would happen for a second

Great work! I love this story. Please update very soon and write longer chapters again!

Love this story and it is great to see an update!

george is lucky its not ginny or hermione. luna is a bit more understanding and patient. please dont be too hard on george next chap, hes had a bad time. nice story so far.

Wow, great chapt! And, the line with Harry and Ron towards the end, classic! ;)

Awesome and please write more thanks.

Good Chapter! I'm glad George has finally straightened some things out. Poor man!

Okay, ADORING this story, and the last bit was HILLARIOUS! (Oliver Twist face) Please, sir, can we have some more?