This is really messed up and oddly fascinating as well. The heart imagery was wonderful.

Very gory. I enjoyed it, but I thought that the ending was a little incompleted. I was unable to find out what he felt about the murder. ZWhat emotions were running through his head. Did he care? Was he jsut being a servant? Sort of confusing, but I enjoyed the questions that ran through my mind. It's good for a story to do that sometimes. Great Work. Very nice.

Kade: Sadistic, creepy, beautifully written and with some yaoi thrown in on the side. GREAT STORY THERE, DUDE!

Hoshi: I have to admit, as far as scary fics go, (which I usually don't like) I rather enjoyed this one. I'm not sure why.

Kage: 'Cause it's really late and you don't want to fall asleep soundly?

Hoshi: Yeah. That's it...

Kage: *hugs author* Whoot! I'm telling my momma about this one! *maniacal laughter*

Hoshi: Don't worry, only the gore. It's fun to creep our momma out. XD

I give you my heart **evil grin** I love it from the bottom of my black little soul _ Seriously, I just adore OroKabu for its twistedness. Very nice job! Cheers,

AngeloftheOdd

How deliciously disturbing. :9

I must spread the twisted love on The OroKabu Directory over at LJ. :)

I'm a little disgusted now, because I was eating while reading. From now on I'll know not to read about blood while I eat, pheh. :D but it was awesome. :)

'He still remembered how the pulsating muscle had felt in his grasp.'

Did you mean that pervertedly or did you still mean the heart? Brilliant by the way */* -gets teary eyed-

This is beautiful!It reads so smoothly and the detail is incredible - I feel as if I'm hovering in the story, and know the characters (Which is impressive because I don't read Naruto) Must keep reminding myself that this was written by you. I love the title and the ending and I think this is just me but I find this story has a very peaceful atmosphere (don't worry,I've been insane for 14 yrs.)

Note's for the Grammar Nazi:lost the 'n' of theN stood back...

lost the ' in girl s breathing grew laboured

It would read more smoothly if you left out the softly in 'set her back...'

OMG!that was so sick that its awesome!XD you did a great job!CX

WoW, just wow. That was odd, but good, I liked it!

ykno, i feel almost sick because i liked that so much

frickin amazing, characters were captured perfectly, and the wording was awesome

like i said, i feel horrible because i loved it

and now, im gonna go read it again :D

This is rather enjoyable reading for those whom enjoy the grotesque- particularly Kabuto- and for those who simply need to read something graphic yet concise.

very .LOVED IT.(Jumping out of really hiper had thin mint girl scout cookies.)

I have a story on the site and i was wondering if u could read it and tell me what u think if u could that be great.

Your story was so good wrighting very descriptive. loved it.

with respect,

orochi-kun.

...That was so cool. Twisted and sick and really weird...but so cool! XD I love it.

Very grotesque but I loved it. It suites the two sound nin very nicely.

Well done.