Interesting but very out of character. Also I believe your rating should be higher.

BUMP! Write more please!

Good... But should the rating be higher?

This is really good, I love how you probed Dari's mind. I think you would be perfect at writing a story about right after Nita told Dari she was a wizard. Yep, I would definitely read it.

That's actually pretty good. I like the idea of writing from Dairine's POV before she becomes a wizard, and this scene from Deep Wizardry is certainly a good one to see Dairine's thoughts on. You've written this quite well; I think Dairine seems very in character.

Yea! I love this story, it is very accurate and angsty and I hope you write some more. Diarine is my favorite character and I identify with her ("Brat!" You shout. "So what?" I reply.) Anyway, thanks!

It was a good story, getting the feeling of anger in Darine and her wanting to prove herself. It was a little rushed but good non the less

Great! You dont see many of these! Good work!

I love it. I feel just like her. Everything is too boring for me. :) Please continue writing. I hate Dairine too, but I am starting to warm up to her...

Interesting.

That's how I feel sometimes. The funny thing is, Nita feels the same way. It sounds verry real. Verry good writing!

Angsty, but suprisingly good, considering how much you put yourself down.

GATOMONOMEGA: I liked this story alot, I always did like angst stories for some reason.

PATAMON: (snickers) Thats because you have a demented mind.

GATOMONOMEGA: Who asked you, anyway? This is a great story, so there! (sticks ounge out at Patamon)

What do you MEAN, you think it's alright? It's great! Yay! Dairine's one of my faves, she's such a brat like me:). Hehehe, ignore this whole disturbing message, 'cause I'm not those Reison things - chocolate covered in chocolate! *Cheers for the genious that invented chocolate & chocolate & runs to the kitchen to get more... MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAAAAA...*

interesting.