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Good start I wov Inu and moon Chan

It was good but if you changed sailor moons name to her real name it would make the people how are reading know it is sailor moon

That was a cool story
but defiting naraku was a bit to easy
and the end was also a bit sad

u should put in 1 more chapter and make a new one

She tell the plan too said Hey Louser!Naraku said The name is Naraku!Kagmoma kicked looked at her and Attack on they go back and fright than got tired and and Searna kick and push him.2 years later Marcy was 11 she had black and white and Miroki now didn't like and Miroki got and Darin had 6 and Inuyasha and Marcy lived in a new and Koga is now Boyfriend & world changed but in a good way!

The women hands was all was said WIND SCAR!The women made a big X and than the Wind Scar didn't hit its replace and it turn too a wield might that was storger than ran too the door but the door was said What do you want!Lady said MY WISE IS INUYASHA AND ALL THE MAN AND BOYS!Inuyasha hugged Kagmoma than sang K...Kagmoma Kagmoma...Kagmoma can see who's the back of was Naraku!Kagmoma said Naraku I know your doing this you want to murder Inuyasha huh!Naraku said Shut Up and die!A gas of Astms came too the cry for her father A.O Inuyasha too knew what too do tell Serana the plan!

The next day was Koga has too sleep sang D for Die L for Lady Kamsed.W for Will K for Kill My mommy!Kagmoma said Marcy go to time out!She walk with her small said Kagmoma what happen and why Marcy is in Time Out?Kagmoma said Marcy was singing a bad song is about Lady Kamsed will kill face was said Who's Lady Kamsed?Kagmoma said I don't said Good Moning!Ray said Shhh!Amy said Do you mind?Lita said Turn off the sun!Mina said Serana is too early for you of coused!Serana said Its late...Everyone is awake...Ray said GET UP EVERYONE!Everone ate and than and Miroki had too talk about the next's time is Mina too fright is a little Mina will take over of little days.1 hour Koga was hitting on Kagmoma.2 hours later he hitting on was think this !MEANWHILE...Sesshoumaru got tried walking so he said Rin sleep I will wake you was tried too so she rain was a little hard and saug the song was annoyed so she said GO TO THE CONER!Marcy tears was like the hard rain a short sceam was in the house hear Kamsed came out her black hair her clouds was her face was all said So are you Kagmoma that made this child cry hmm?!Kagmoma said You monster!Inuyasha said Did you tell my baby too sing that wired song!;Lady Kamsed said YES!Lita said your tease!She tryed to changed too SailorJupiter but she can' said You did this!The lady smiled scerier than before!

Rin said Hello!What your name?Mina said Mina now bye!Mina long blond hair flys during she saw Sango was said Bye...He was also in love with her but also saw Koga running down the hill too and Sango and Miroki and Ray was said Kagmoma just give birth too a baby said I missed that!Lita ran and said Koga is here!Kagmoma held Marcy in her arms where she was Koga saw the baby he think "Oh no shes have my baby!"Koga didn't nosie's said Kagmoma lets move to get a kick him and walked too feed got said Come on guys we , Ray , Sernea , Mina go with Lita too take a long saw down too the waterfall too get off the looked at kiss Inuyasha when shes cared was out of his mind!First Kagmoma now Lita?Lita said Ray can you get your butt of my back?!Ray said sorry!Kagmoma and Sango also suck so they taked a long sat down on the came and sat with said Koga do you love Lita than Kagmoma?Koga said I love said Lita is talking about .Koga got a little he married both?When the girls was done they wear new came said Amy why you are not in said Boys are jerks.

Mine walked with said Sango do you deeply love Miroki?Sango said Yes we both love each other we never ever wanted a life with out each smiled ...Sesshoumaru said Rin don't move a demon or a human is near by...Rin said Laod Sesshouumaru is it Inuyasha you see?Sesshourmaru said No that girl...Rin was and Sango heared a bell.A bell! the valleniers shouted.A women came down from the sky.A child shouted Lady Marledy!The people ran as she fired said Who's her?Mina said Sango I will changed too said No your powerless that's the thing I boughed you here hid!Mina did as she was tell she ran too the said Oh on!Sango is hurt!Sango said Now Ray and Miroki!Sailor Mars and Miroki jumped out of a kicked ...Kagmoma was ready too gave acted like a helped was hoping for its safe and it was a Inuyasha wasn't luckily!It was a said This is Marcy!Marcy smiled as she was held. Leato said A demon baby?Or a human?Or a half demon?Kikyo said Its a half said Mommy!Kagmoma held her said Kagmoma a demon!A demon was said JUPITER LIGHT POWER!MOON STAR LIGHT POWER!MERCURY LIGHT POWER!They ran too defiend the uninvedy ...Rin said There shes is!Mina said Oh Sango your like a sister I said Human saw said Hello...

Amy and Ray got loose in the woods!Amy said Ray!Ray said I think this is the end for Mars and...Mcarey said SailorMoon save tham!WIND TIND!Said !Said Scar!Said said The others are injerd!Sargo and the others save lives!

I love the story put another chapter. Mina and Sesshomaru should meet again, and so should Lita and Koga. all my firends love this story. they just don't reveiw

Good chapter it is a good wrap up to a fine story. I have liked reading this story

What! thats it! I don't get it? aww I can't beleive that it is over man I want to know what happends, oh well, it was good and I like how you ended it but I still would like a little more LOL hahaha.

Hugs

Hattaru.

Aw... well that is a nice end