Reviews for Leaving |
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reader chapter 12 . 4/27/2010 You could make this marriage take place before their first meeting. Jack was then already divorced. |
Guest chapter 11 . 4/21/2008 I enjoyed this story even though at times it got a little confusing. |
ALIMOO1971 chapter 12 . 4/21/2008 i under stand this story as for the year, you could put 1996 for when they got married cause that is when he retired from the air force after the first abydose mission. Cause in 1997 Jack was called out of retirement. I hope this might help with the idea |
Eternal Density chapter 11 . 4/21/2008 yay, they found a way to have their cake and eat it too :D nice ending. and Confused Carter... lol! :D |
iwrite4fun chapter 11 . 4/21/2008 I'm so glad to see this story has a happy ending, even if I don't want to see it end! |
ALIMOO1971 chapter 11 . 4/21/2008 Great chapter and story, keep up the good work |
Devilish Me chapter 11 . 4/21/2008 Great story, enjoyed it a lot. :) |
JFreak1334 chapter 11 . 4/21/2008 Oh wow! Absolutely wonderful ending! Marvelous really! Kinda confusing...poor Sam! Loved it! HEHEHE I want cake! I don't have any... must go buy some! Looking forward to more of your amazing and awesomely talented work! KEEP IT UP! Astronomical! :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D Thank you for posting this amazingly confusing story! It's brilliant! :D :D :D :D KEEP IT UP!...again! LOL :D :D :D ~J_F |
ALIMOO1971 chapter 10 . 4/20/2008 Great chapter, Please, please up date soon |
dp chapter 10 . 4/20/2008 Nice chapter. Looking forward to the epilogue. |
Guest chapter 10 . 4/20/2008 Hope you write a part 2 where they try a different way to get married. |
iwrite4fun chapter 10 . 4/20/2008 I've been following so far- and I really hope that something could have happened so that they could stay married! |
Eternal Density chapter 10 . 4/20/2008 sad it had to turn out that way, but it does make some sort of sense... lets see if the epilogue is a bit happier. good work - ED |
Kelly Moreland chapter 10 . 4/19/2008 Wow what an update. Hate to see it end, because you've written it so well. But all good things, including well done fics, must come to an end. |
JFreak1334 chapter 10 . 4/19/2008 Ah! Messing with the time line only leads to sadness, bitterness and unfortunate happenings! Why we continue to mess with it I will NEVER know! Keep messing with it though! Love this piece! Absolutely can't wait for the epilogue! It's horribly sad that it's almost over, wish there was more! But what you have done and will post soon I hope is amazing! Fantastically excellent job! KEEP UP the INCREDIBLE WORK! :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D Must go watch Stargate SG-1! AGH! ~J_F |