That was . . . definitely different? I'm not sure what to think other than 'ok'. It is great for putting in what you want, or leaving out what you don't want, so I guess that was good enough.

Damn... So, Cross was just panning on changing Allen's clothes and then ended up kissing him... And, of course, he wished he was drunk that night. Yeah, okay... Totally not weird at all. -note the sarcasm- Though how you wrote it was indeed beautiful.. -grumbles grudgingly-

what happened? did cross rape him or what?! poor allen is confused. and cross is bring stupid (pouts) but good story

Oh, I liked this. I liked this a lot. Everything from the POv switches to little details like the hole in the grey sock and the 'raining red' (beautiful, right there) was brilliant. I like the contrast between Allen and Cross' thoughts - Allen's were so muddled, confused, inexperienced, but Cross' thoughts were more, idk, not *organised* exactly, but more *sure*. Lovely!

I've never seen a story written like this before, but it was very well done. I liked the switching between their POV during the scene, and how the reader gets to see both sides, in how they both hate but love what happens. Beautifully written!

I haven't read to many stories written like this. I really liked it. D

Very interesting !

I liked it !

- How i love CrossxAllen !

It's really good. Actually, it could be better, because it seems that sometimes you lost control of the text, but.. It's still really good !

"It was raining red" : pure genius.

That was very sad.

Not bad. Original for the switching of character POV though.

...that kind of confused me but i think i got it at the end.

Oh... so you have a secret TiedollxKanda obsession? xD I undersand that. lol Sometimes I catch myself thinking this way, too XD

Anyway, omg what a wonderful piece of work we have here. I love it how Cross' thoughts are so objective and Allen's are so confused.

(have I mentioned that CrossxAllen is my OTP of all other OTP's? xDD ). I love it when Allen is like 'It was raining red' OMG. (that... that was about Cross hair, right?)

And then Cross insists that he wasn't drunk, I love it. I love it that he wanted to do it and he was absolutely sure of that, and still, he kept telling himself that he wasn't drunk, that he wasn't mistaken because of alcohol, that he really did aim for Allen even though he kinda hoped that his apprentice would protest or even be asleep.

And the gray socks with a hole in the left heel. OMG that detail... it is so sweet. It is so sweet that Cross knows this pair of socks and it is so cute that Allen wonders if maybe it was because of the socks that Cross wouldn't look at him.

OMG. that makes me dream.

I love it, I really do. It's so sweet.

At the same time that I want to know what would happen after that, I also don't want to know, because that moment was perfect and complete.

That was wonderful.

I myself am sort of a cross between RRs 1 and 2...I'm of the opinion that AllenxCross is not necessarily all evil (or whatever...) but I also have a hard time imagining it without a large helping of angst and pedophilia sort of things.

Thus this fic fit in quite nicely to my little AllenxCross world view, which made me happy. Plus it was well written as always, with a good amount of that trippy dreamlike sort of feeling which, as you may remember from my reviews of your different stories, I love. (And it's so hard to find fanfics written like that...)

A great job as always...this is like, what? The 5th or 6th story I've reviewed for you? And I have yet to find a bad one. :3 Keep up the good work!

The psychological stand-point of this fan fiction is incredible! The effect of the tumbling thoughts were just like the thinking process, and the repeated mantras of each character really made this seem to real! Excellent work!

I like how the fic was done. The thoughts sometimes made it difficult to understand what was happening, but that was also a strong point for them. What made it a weakness was that it could be completely blown out of proportion until the end where they say "first kiss". The idea of the paring itself, though not new is a possible combination that actually works well now with later chapters and is cute and works with how traumatized Allen is of his master.

I thought it was lovely! I was confused at first about how to read it, but once I figured it out I enjoyed it. Putting it in that format was quite effective.