Ranka is the most stupid father. Haruhi is more independent and needs to cut him off. He abandoned her because she reminded him of her mother boo hoo.

So I reay really liked the story! I do have to laugh at myself a bit though because I'm American and have never left the country. I take a French class though so when I saw the thing about the host club having dinner at school (Ps America doesn't have dinner at school) that's when I started to notice some differences, so I honestly thought that you author-chan were French because I had learned in French that Lunch is the French's big meal of the day instead of Dinner like in America, so I checked out your profile (not to be creepy or anything, just to see if I was right) and I saw that thing about the University of England so I guess England must be similar to France in that way. Anywho, I also noticed that you used rang in a place in which I'd normally use called, and I'm not exactly sure what the word flat means, but I figure it's some term for residence. I suppose there wasn't any point in saying this but I found it as a neat cultural thing and it surely made your story interesting to read (in the best way of course!) I have every intention of reading more of your stories!

What an amazing story! Really enjoyed reading it. Thank you so much for sharing

No freaking way

Yyyyaaaaassss her protector

Always looking after her

Omg how can he say that to her great first chapter

I wish they were in college or something, 15 seams unreasonable to live alone. But I loved it!

Sad, good.

I love this! Even though it been (YEARS) a long time since it was published, I felt the need to review. It was adorable, and had a wonderful storyline! Keep on writing, dear!

Love,
shipperhere

Would you consider writing a sequel?

I like this :D

This will unravel nicely.

Interesting...

but what made me laugh was 'hum' sorry XD

I love this