Reviews for A Venturi Plan of Action
angiesoluv1 chapter 1 . 9/18/2016
I love When marti gets involved! Not one sentence of this story was boring. Definitely one of the best one shots I've ever read
asteriskhappynotincluded chapter 1 . 12/20/2013
So cute! Marti is precious and Derek's soft spot for her is always the cutest thing alive.
bubblemachines chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
I love all of your stories, but this was exeptionally amazing! Any possibility of you doing Lizwin of this type?
ChristinaAngel chapter 1 . 12/1/2009
I love Marti and her trying to play matchmaker to win against her best friend was really her. I loved how she did in a typically Marti way with Daphne helping her and a prank even worse than Derek's. She's so conniving and with the excuse of Daphne everyone just goes along with it plus the way Derek is with Marti is so sweet. I liked how they got together in the end.
SusanMarieS chapter 1 . 9/4/2009
cool story. thanks for the effort.
Fadetonoir chapter 1 . 4/1/2009
Really cute!
indefinitelyhigh chapter 1 . 3/25/2009
Ah! I just love this :D Marti for Dasey FTW!
WhenLighteningStrikes chapter 1 . 3/10/2009
This is just *beyond* hilarious I love the fact that it's from Marti's POV, and I don't know *how* you managed it, but you managed to keep *everyone* in chracter.

I like how Marti is like mini!Derek, with her "evil take-over-the-world plans" (or just operation Dasey, but sometimes I think taking over the world might be easier than getting those two to admit they like each other!)

And Derek always *does* cave to Smarti cuteness, and the line "Because he's Derek" is just *so* true. There doesn't have to be a reason for anything that Derek does, it's all because He' k.

"Unless you were Marti. And she was Marti, was she not" again, hilarious and true because Marti is the only one for whom Derek bends backwards (another reason why we *adore* him, who wouldn't love a guy like that?)

Loved it!
Don-Jam chapter 1 . 12/6/2008
I Love thing when there Marti POV. I like Naomi Mam and Dad. To the Second Plan! Thank You.
SNN chapter 1 . 7/18/2008
Okay, so I have a new appreciation for the antics of Marti. :) And I loved how she manipulated Derek so many times. That was precious.

Amazing job! ]
wprincessannw chapter 1 . 7/10/2008
Marti and Dasey - couldnt ask for more! great job :)
Arcanum Paradox chapter 1 . 4/18/2008
A few errors but all in all, you did an amazing job.
splenetic chapter 1 . 4/16/2008
That was absolutely hilarious. The ending, especially, had me in stitches.

Great job. You write Marti fantastically.
bsloths chapter 1 . 4/5/2008
I like Naomi's parents! :)

That was great! Seeing Marti the Matchmaker is always fun, and you pulled it off well!
explanations chapter 1 . 4/4/2008
Is Naomi Paul's daughter?

I hope she is, because I could SO see that. Especially with the mom and everything.

Great story!
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