It's...absolutely beautiful, I've never been fond of Nagisa, for me she's always seemed to the dummy cupboard made to emphasize Shizuma in the anime . But the way you wrote about her feelings is so moving that I actually feel bad for her.

She can't fight, she's helpless against the spectra of Kaori. Shizuma did not change after all, she's cheating on her. In her head. And she can't do anything to fight against that.

Very good for writing and the maturity you gave to Nagisa, really, I love it. I wish you'd actually write a whole fic about it, it'd be wonderful. But I guess it will never happen.

Thank you a thousand times for sharing it.

Hazel.

You made me cry! How could you!

Anyway, this was really great! Professionally written! I also like your perspective, its a really rare way to look at it. But I like it!

When I read "I love Shizuma with all I am. I am hers, and only hers...forever" it made me cry for a really long time, it's so sweet.

It is painfully sad because it is true! :(( That's the worst part. ut it is also beautiful. I am pained for nagisa, but I hope Shizuma and Kaori will be reunited.

Depressing D:, I want to make a Longer sotry about this hhahaha~! It was Really God~!

wow. i think i'll go crawl into a corner and die now.

that was really well written and I enjoyed every bit of it even though I'm not too happy about the forever NagisaxShizuma pairing. (I'm also kinda depressed that Tamao never confessed when she was CONSCIOUS but that rant is for my fanfic) anyway beautifully written and very touching. Few oneshots are great but this definitely raised the bar. now I think i sould end this before it starts getting way too long.

Wow. Good job.

When I saw the end of episode 19, I just broke. I was depressed the rest of the next day. And that might've happened to some as well, but its A LOT coming from me, as I'm a guy and I rarely get weepy or emotional about movies and such.

But I totally loved it! It was really sad, but I was completely feeling that angst-y vibe you were putting down! Nice oneshot!

Oy... That was a roller coaster disaster into depression. But... I really did enjoy it. I'm so glad to have read it- thats how much I liked it. I know how it feels to be in love with someone who will always love someone else, so, sadly, I connected well with this.

(Crying)

Wow... poor Nagisa-chan... To be honest, I’ve always thought of Nagisa-chan as a cute little girl who was always cheerful, yet oblivious to a lot of things around her. That’s not necessarily a bad thing though... anyway, the point is, I would have never guessed she would think about things so seriously like that. You did an excellent job of showing how she would have matured over the years. Although, I can see that these are most likely your own words, aren’t they? This is relatively how I feel in real life, so I enjoyed seeing it on paper, even if it did make me a bit sad. But the good news is; now I’m inspired to write again! Arigatou! Yoku dekimashita! (WELL DONE)

Oh yeah, and I think Kaori is really cute. Just thought I’d bore you with that useless info :)

aw that was seriously depressing, you are so right you geneous you)

Wow, this was good. Very depressing, but also good. And it does make sense for Nagisa to think she'd be playing second fiddle. I'm sure Shizuma means it when she says she belongs to Nagisa completely, but subconsciously different rules seem to apply in this story. I like the inclusion of Shizuma and Nagisa in their old age too. Neat addition.

Heh, as for the afterlife, let me paraphrase my good friend Remco here : "In Heaven, threesomes are allowed. In Hell, threesomes are mandatory." :)

Sad yet cute often forget that in both manga and anime nagisa shows jealousy towards kaori.

PS: and to make you feel a little better this is what waits for nagisa and shizuma on the afterlife:

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BE CAREFUL SPOILER FOR MANGA'S VOLUME 2

Thank you very much.

Nice and so sad at the same time.

Poor Nagisa chan.

She got it really bad there.

Good work.