Amazing! The best fan fiction I’ve read so far, with the best ending in the world! It’s about damn time we had some happy stuff going on

Nice fic but the problem lies within canon itself. It never addresses the abusive dursley's. You can't just *wipe it away* with soap and water.

I LOVE this story! The ending is just too cute!

This is good and really original, but way to rushed. In the future slow down your fanfics or make them multi chaptered. Also, the characters were lacking reactions.

I gotta tell you but Fate is the biggest bitch of all, sadistic whore.

too unrealistic trying to make it too much of a happy ending

But, question, there was no gift of Voldemort's end. But the last line says no Voldemort. Did they kill him, or . . .

Haha! Yes you do! (have an overactive imagination)
I can't believe you made all this Fate-thing up! It was hilarious!

Who ever said that an overactive imagination was bad!? I'll kill him/her!

I would just like to congratulate you on a superbly written story and would like to encourage you to expand on it.

Good story. Just wondering, wouldn't Umbridge stop the curse in between to question him? Why would she keep the curse on him for 30 minutes without stopping it at all. Poor Harry, Fate is so mean. I don't vare how much she defends her actions, she is cruel and makes everything bad happen to him.

However, it was in vein-vain not vein
Finally the floo powder tumped.-dumped
"There are other LEGAL ways. And if the Minister dared make that curse legal, just remember that it can be used against you to.-too, which is used in place of also.
I think these are your only major mistakes; however, you would do well to give it a second look.

I SUPER LOVED IT! I wish you could give a sequel to this, as in when Harry actually defeated the snake faced bastard a.k.a old voldy! xD

TWO PAWS UP from padfoot lover!

-yes, PADFOOT STILL ROCKS!-

I couldn't wipe the smile off my face the whole time I read that. It was awesome, I loved it.

Good story!