I know that I've read this story like a billion times and (just found it again). yay! I totally thought I commented on how amazing this story is but I guess I was wrong. Anyway thank you so much for writing this. :D

ok for the record i just found this story today and i gotta say it's pretty interesting and i can't wait for more will we find out what's so interesting about the rock paper scissors game next chapter? and after a bit i actually had a feeling the child was genma and you confirmed it a few chapters later well like i said i can't wait for more this story is really good

I liked it! The idea was interesting and the suspense was well constructed and with some really cool scenes in this story! Though it would have been possible to explain some things and moods in more detail to make some ...er, moods last longer. (so many 'moods' in this sentencs o.o') For example it was really well done how you created an dangerous atmosphere of the enemies, and I really feared for Genma. But suddelny -alghough realistic- the first one went down by Naruto's kunai suprise attack. The fight could have been longer and the danger-level, wich was so carefully constructed before, could have been shown more...erm threatening during the actual fight.

And I didn't get why Tsunade sent so many people just to get Genma back. If she already knew that he was about to do something stupid and dangerous, it would have been a good idea to mention that in her thoughts or something.

But I liked the adventourous, exciting and reasonable mood in your story. Good idea and good writingstyle. I wouln't have minded if there were more chapters, and perhaps more details of Genma's interesting but cruel and dark past.

Argh, sorry for a disorderly review! *drop*