Reviews for Broken
A.Vicarious.Addiction chapter 12 . 7/26
I GASPED! I am enjoying this so much. The emotions are so palpable reading this. Wow! I had a slight feeling about the father but it still took me aback when it was confirmed!
Iamgroot474 chapter 24 . 7/22
"I sat with my anger long enough, until she told me her real name was grief."
DownTheFanficHole chapter 36 . 7/17
I loved every minute of reading this

My heart broke along the way, but patched it up the same pace.
EmiloDfirst chapter 36 . 7/10
One of the best books I've read. I love the slow burn. I love how everything was frustratingly complicated. Bless you and your briiliant mind.
Guest chapter 27 . 6/29
I've tried to read this fic multiple times because it's always in the top recommended Dramione fics, and I can never finish it. The crazy hoops and hurdles and twists to make Hermione always the poor whiny victim just pain me, not to mention that everyone ADORES her or HATES her. There's no development/explanation for Slytherins embracing her easily and never once mentioning blood purity. Her and Draco have the chemistry of a wet blanket.

The exposition/monologues are just excruciating. They repeat themselves over the same old points over and over. And any weird contrivance to make Hermione the victim again happens (e.g., Lucius attacks her in the Manor, and THAT'S the impetus for Narcissa's acceptance of her husband being lost to his madness, not him nearly KILLING her own son?)

Dramione is my OTP. I honestly think the author is great with words, story development, etc, so this isn't a slight on their skill, but maybe this fic just isn't for me. It's odd because I love like 99% of the top recommended Dramione, I suppose this is the 1%.
queensands chapter 24 . 6/21
Jesus. Your writing is so powerful. I love this story so much!
Ari's World chapter 1 . 6/14
I have been looking for this story for AGES! I finally found it!
Luzula-spicata chapter 36 . 6/12
Wonderful fiction!
I loved this
Thank you very much for your beautiful story
Elsbeth Ravensblood chapter 36 . 6/9
Amazing story. I've re-read it a half dozen times over the years and have re-read the Draco/Parvati, Hermione/Ginny chapters a couple of dozen times. Very powerful writing. Thank you for writing it. ER
Mella Potter chapter 27 . 6/7
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GlowDust7501 chapter 36 . 6/6
This story... I think it's the most like real life story that I've ever read. No one was perfect or completely happy and it just made everything seem so real. The way you characterized Hermione's struggles really hit deep because I've felt like that too and I just... Thank you for writing this
Lyla Rose chapter 3 . 6/4
I'm confused-
What happened between the Golden Trio?
Guest chapter 36 . 6/2
Beautiful
dontlookatmeplease chapter 11 . 6/2
I am not one to cry. I have to admit this chapter did make me tear up
YayimaHufflepuff chapter 36 . 6/1
I am not the type of person to gush about how im "crying literal tears" but goddamn this story... There were moments when i choked up, had blurry vision but had to keep reading in the hope that it got better. This was artfully done and im so glad i read it. Your Draco was amazing too and i love the back and forth push and pull between the characters especially when their friends got involved... Amazing.. Just amazing
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