This idea would be cool if she was actually paired with someone from the Hamilton series. As is, I detest Edward and how Bella is around him.

please update x

That has got to be the best vampire sex yet. I loved the fight for dominance. Good thing they both need fed

I just recently discovered this story and I just want to tell you I absolutely love what you've done with Edward. I love that you've made him into the alpha male that he is.

hopefully you're still working on this...

Fantastic story so far with all sorts of twists and turns! Oh boy it's also hot hot hot! Your story is erotic not nasty as so many are, please think about finishing it!

that was simply wonderful!

Just getting into chap 5when I checked if complete, bummer. Hope your husband is ok

This story is great. I just want to know when this story is going to be updated. It has been 5 years since the last update.

This is pretty intersting...i skimmed and got pretty confused as to what was being talked about or what was going on but whatever certain bit's and part's I liked them so hay! Anyway plz read/review my story broken rose petal's if you like it let mey nooo and pass it on for other's to check out plz and thank you :)

Have courage and faith. I lost my husband last year to cancer and I have 2 teenage boys I am raising on my own. These stories entertain and get me away from the sadness and loss I feel. Keep that in mind when you write. You not only please yourself, but you please others as well. Thank you.

If you still check this PLEASE come back and finish this story!

Im so glad I found this story! I dont know if you are still going to continue writing it however wanted to say I am really enjoying it. Thanks for posting :)

I do love this story and hope that you will feel able to continue. I wish you well!

what a wounderful story . i can not wait for more. thank you