OMG. LOVE IT! so what i was looking for. yes it is sad, but i like it! :)

Well written

Heartwrenching and angsty. I like it though because when you can write angst it shows talent. YOU have talent.

Y'know? This should be part of New Moon! It's a great preface!

This is the best thing in the Twilight section I have read so far. Congrats, its amazing.

Hey, I really like your writing. Despite New Moon being my least favorite of the books, I also find Bella's depression to be one of the most moving and poetic things to write about. You really capture her mindset here, especially with the utter dreariness of the line "Because I do that. I do that every night." I also really like "The tears of the sky are my tears". How metaphorical! Keep up the good work.

So...the Twilight madness broke me down. Actually, to be accurate, I got sick of placing my name on the hold lists at the library and finally broke down to buy the books.

I went to Target, bought Twilight and New Moon, and read them both within the course of 36 hours.

THEY WERE AMAZING! I absolutely fell in love with the characters, and I cannot wait for Eclipse to come out in paperback (I'm kind of a cheapskate...I don't like spending my well-earned money on hardcovers) and I'm dying to know what happens with Jake and Edward and Bella!

But onto your story...

It was so amazing! I don't know why I'm writing that like I'm surprised, because I know by now that you're one of the best authors on this site, but still. This is my first Twilight fic that I've read, and I think it was brilliant. Very Bella-like.

Keep writing! ]

Always,

Lena

Ps- Happy 4th!

omfj!

that's insanity D

you write twilight

and cr fics

i love twilight D

and Camp Rock

and JB )

this is an awesome story.

it like, perfectly summarizes poor bella's feelings :(

write more

ok im not going to say 'so sad' even if it is, its the truth as i thought she felt in the months skipped in new moon its good

its touching it really is. I can really see that happening too. I wish s.m had of written what bella was like those 1st few months after edward left but if she did i think it would be similar to this so good job! two thumbs up

loved it! very descriptive and for the first time i've read a pov that's not all over the place. good job i must say.

that was very good and very nicely written and i am gonna say it..SO SAD!

...Wow.

So dark and angsty and depressing and Edward-less...

I love it! Fantastic job, Katie. You really caught her emotions well, this story is made of awesome.

~Kiowa