Dear Ani:

In re the disclaimer: No, it doesn't. "Shall not be thine" would make sense, but "shalt" is only used for the second person singular pronoun.

Sincerely,

Qoheleth

Sweet! You updated! Luminara sounds like she's pmsing or something.. please update?

Ah, not even Yoda knows all.

Good chapter.

I love it! This is amazing. Keep writing please.

Very good.

I especially liked the part about not even Yoda knowing what the Force had in store for them. It shows that Jedi don't know everything, just because, no one can.

Update when you can, i'm assured it will be worth the wait.

This is very good -waves hand- 'you shall continue'

Please please continue this is to well written to be abandoned

this is awesome! keep it up, PLEASE? -makes puppy dog eyes-

Looks good so far, but I really want to see them become master and apprentice! And maybe some drama between them. I like your depiction of Luminara, because I always felt she was a little bit too stuck up in the movies. Anyway, I know you may not update this story ever, but it's really cool. Hope to see an email from about this story soon!

can who ever wrote this story please continue it

Short, but sweet. Good job!

Ah! please update, I really really like this story...please?

Here! I am reviewing. Can't wait for the next bit. This story is actually really good. I love LUMINARA! She seems really grumpy lately...

hold on a second. Brie as in Shira Brie? Lumiya training in the Temple? I have a bad feeling about this...

Alright, I'm so sorry, but I have to work on writing my story down on word beacause I can't remember it forever. To make it up to you, though, I'm dedicating one story to you specifically and calling it Cast Shadows. If it's alright, I even included Ani as the hero!

Great Story I Luv it!

You have a good since of humor

You have good writing skills!

Keep up the good work!