well the obv choice would be sasuke but are going to go with the obv choice or mix it up ab bit

Add more chapters please

damn, even kakashi is an arogant prick

Great job

"My name is Naruto Uzumaki-Namikaze Lebeau. You killed a man I consider a grandfather…prepare to die."
I understood the reference

The obviously fake Cajun accent is getting old, he grew up in the institute, how would he get an accent? It comes off as forced and switching between mere and peer and tou san and kaa san is annoying. The story overall is good and I am enjoying it aside from what I previously mentioned.

Why would rejection about being a mutant be so much worse than rejection over the kyuubi?

Does he talk tale tamatoa or does he talk like King dedede?

going to go ahead and give my two cents about the story.

I like your rendition of Naruto. both the age you chose to write them being and the choices they had made. I truly dislike how you brought the two worlds together. (marvel and Naruto) one world, is well defined and simple with a rediculous power gap between certain groups. The other is Marvel. A complete cluster of writing that is contradictory at best and simply filled with paradoxes at worst. Then you take away the nature of Chakra and the potential of that Mystic talent and replace it with mutations from Marvel.

With the simple example of current Naruto (boruto) lore. Naruto is able to survive an attack that is capable of bisecting the moon.

yeah. so again... why is Chakra nearly ignored over the course of the story in favor of poorly understood mutations.

I just feel the story could have turned out better if you went one direction or the other instead of a messy crossover. Then again Marvel crossovers are always messy.

I do like the story. Found myself frustrated at ignoring the potential of Chakra regardless. Including how fast Chakra makes some Shinobi. or how strong..

just noticed now that you changed the age of the Shinobi. glad you did so since it's incredibly awkward fantasising about some characters when they re young.

Naruto is too impulsive, pretty much imidiately he shows off and has no problem with sharing S ranked secrets. There is also the Sasuke problem, Sasuke might glare at Naruto and try to attack him from behind once in a duel after he's beaten but in this story he seems almost psychotic compared to the broken(as in emotionally) Sasuke in canon.

Lmao, why are people questioning the graduation age? it's probably for the romance, let's be real reading about two 12 year olds realising their feelings is cute but two 16 year olds is just more realistic and better, and a 12 year old OP naruto is never good for anything but bashing sasukes face in with insults.

Ain't 16 when all shipp started, how come it's now when they graduate, wount they be weaker then as they're just fresh out?

From my view only kakashi is out of character mizuki seems to be the same personality as in canon

I mean i liked the idea. But after reading this chapter and the snowball of powers naruto has immediately, it has qyickly lost my interest. If you want a super powered character fine but do a better job of selling it than a "this is everything i can do now and this is why." speech. Show, dont tell.

Better yet, show us the growth naturally. Far more interesting is the story of a struggle to power. Also getting rid of something as plot relevent as the kyuibi in a single paragraph is just a missed opportunity. I cant imagine why you would just delete him like that other than simply not wanting the hassle of incorporating him in your story, which simply comes off as lazy