A handgun with a "pre-loaded EMPTY 'CLIP'"?
No Such Thing. A pre-loaded MAGAZINE... yes. But NOT what you wrote. A "clip" is a piece of spring steel holding a determinate number of cartridges, loaded into a breech of a firearm (usually an older type of rifle) and then depressed downward into the internal magazine well.
A modern semi-automatic weapon uses a magazine, a box-like affair with cartridges pre-loaded and an internal spring underneath the rounds to keep them feeding after each shot.
The magazine is usually always inserted upwards into the grip of the pistol, or in the case of a long gun, upward into the magazine well located under the breech.
Your use of the term 'clip' is completely incorrect. A technical point, yes. But an important one for accuracy's sake.
An excellent story, however!

wow i really like this story.

Sadly it seems Harry's being pathetic as usual.

It's odd really, I don't think I've read a single fic that handled the death of both Sirius and Cedric properly, the simple fact was Harry wasn't to blame for either of their deaths, nor did he know them particularly well.

In order for their even to be a possiblity of a competent Harry, neither of these deaths should affect him, at all. Of course authors prefer to stick with their childish delusions that the word godfather means instant attachment, whilst ignoring Harrys real experience with family.

Great story so far. Seems like a whirlwind romance and the normal life of Harry, meaning anything strange can and will happen. Too bad there is no way for Harry to awaken some magical capability in Leal. Speaking of which, aren't there muggle repelling charms and stuff around that should have been sending Leal running the opposite direction?

What about the grandparent wills?

what about the business manager and the secretary?

Wow! This is a great story! I do wish that you would continue it! :D THe plot line was great, however I have noticed a few mistakes. in the 5th Chapter, you have harry and Lael heading to headquarters to tell Remus about their marriage, but in the first or second chapter they are planning to go to headquarters to hear the meeting of the Order of the Phoenix. harry keeps the piece of parchament in his pocket to make sure that dumbledore is not going to use HQ for only his benefit. *Therefore, a plot mistake.

I do hope/wish that you would finish or continue this story, because it is very believeable. I have enjoyed reading it! :D

not bad keep up the good work thanks and bye.

Great story. I hate to admit it but I was hoping for a magical wife as well - Ha! Thanks for sharing!

Awesome. Love this story. Please update soon. )

that is good hope you update soon

Nice job on this story. I'm really enjoying the twist on the MI5 and Harry marrying a muggle.

I'm looking forward to the update.

Hey I just spent the last I dont know quite a few hours reading this story and I got to say...WoW, WoW, WoW...it literally blew me away! I abolutely love stories like this. I'm so sick of reading canon type stories... The character of Lael was outstanding and the whole process and the MI5 things and I see where you like lordwar work. I sure hope you finish this someday!

I would honestly have to rate this in the top 25, I would say top 10 but to be honest I have been reading hp fanfiction for about 4 yrs now and I have quite a few stories...say a couple hundred that are really good...and say about hundred that are outstanding...and say about 25 or 30 that are top ten type...so this is in the top ten type stories, so do us all a favor and finish it someday!

dude this is one most excellent story I do hope you update again soon,

darth

quite good can't wait for more

update soon