I think you worry to much. Just write nice stories, do not try to write great perfect stories. Better a nice short little story that is written than a great epic novel that remains within your head. Yes? o.o

Thank you for writing stories. I wish I could send a beautiful review to please you. o.o

It is with great sadness that I inform you all that this author, whom I had the pleasure and privilege to know from the time we were in high school, passed away this morning.

Katy, you are loved and missed.

very interesting cant wait to see what unfolds

I regret to inform you that my reading of your story has stopped. I've found that I've fallen in love with these characters and am hard pressed to let them go. I may check out the revised version of this fanfic...

Here's to hoping that you will update anyway.

-Brandy

Unfortunatly, I must admit that this fanfic is holding me captive. From the very start I noticed that this was a very mature story. Written by someone who has atleast some kind of knowledge of writing. So many stories on here lack that kind of author.

I enjoy these kinds of stories. Ones with a submissive wolf that isn't truly in their right place. The assertions of dominance are almost like a game. You included this incredibly well in this story.

Looking forward to your future chapters.

I usually end my reviews in a 'Hope you don't fuck it up...', but somehow I don't think you will.

-Brandy

If you're just starting to read this story, go check my most recent review for the revised version of is story -Predator and Pray- where I have posted an update on behalf of Ms. Flintlock.

I just found your story, and I have to say I'm impressed. I always enjoy finding fanfictions that are stories in and of themselves. This one has been particularly enjoyable for me. The wolf pack dynamic is so fascinating! I was kind of sad when I saw that the last update was from last year, but I know how life can get. I do hope that I'll be able to read more of this story soon, and I wish you the best of luck with whatever you're doing right now.

Sincerely,

CrazyWolf

Apparently you can only review each chapter once.

Just a quick update, because I'm just as impatient as the rest of you to see the story.

She is working on it, I am trying to cajole it from her grasping fingers while she 'fixes' it. She's not changing the plot, just extending it and giving it a bit more depth.

It'll be awesome, trust me. Please be patient. :-)

Hello

i really like what i have read so far...

Thank you for writing.. i am looking forward to more

so i am add you to subscribe lists...

Smiles

I swear she's working on this! However, like most authors, she wants it to be perfect; and from her point of view that means revising so she doesn't miss anything or repeat unnecessary parts.

She's loves the positive feedback by the by. _

I was near depressed tears when I saw you haven't updated in since December. You are a creative and well spoken writer. Thank you for adding what you have so far.

I hope to be able to read further.

I love this story and can't wait to see how it ends.

Read your author's note. I completely understand the needs of academic writing. Hopefully you'll get time for this in the future. In case you care to know my opinion, I'd rather see new chapters rather than revised ones. Revise at the end. :) But I"m selfish (and want more) and like what you've written.

I have really enjoyed your story so far. You have done a wonderful job creating your own characters and plot within the Mercy Thompson mythology without actually including any of the series characters. It has been great. Unfortunately I don't read anything with an M rating, so good luck with the rest of the story. Sorry I won't be following along.

And for anyone reading these reviews... I already know the gist behind the story... heeheehee, you'll really like it, if you think about it you'll probably get it...:}