It was kinda incomplete

"1 hour and 10 arguments later" lol that was funny.. awesome story btw p.s this goes for the sequel also

Really great story. Just needs a little work on the grammer and punctuation and your good to go! Also very good for your first story.

LOL I remember reading something almost exactly like this but Drew was sleep talking instead! I'm not accusing you of stealing though!

I wonder what happens when May catches up to Drew. That's why I'm gonna read the sequel right now :)

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I like an all but...I read another one thats just like this only a little differnt.

If I saw it first It would of been better but yeahh...The other one was hard to follow...Yours was easy...You should really hook it up sometime an read it. :3 Don't worry I dont accusde you of stealing the idea at all I think it's ok an cute and Hell far you guys might just of had the same idea Lol But I do like it

You should make another story with it 3

i like your story a lot can i pls put it on my blog on blogspot? i will give you full credit ofcourse :)

So CUTE! I really loved it, and i loved the ending

First it was a great story excepy i wish it was longer and i'm woundering what happend after she cought up with him

You definently need a squel You KNOW!

You might want to work on the punctuation and grammar, but otherwise very cute. Nice plot. :)

hey great first fic! maybe you should write a second one on what happens when may catches up with drew! hahaha :-)

hehe! that waz funnyish! LOL funnyish. Isnt that a funny word? LMAO! keep writing!

It was a good story but i think you could work on your dialogue and adjectives. But otherwise it was a good story.

Cute! I liked it! :P

You really should make a sequel! I love it.

I think this is rather sweet:P

So kawaii! Awesome Job