nice story, looking forward to your future stories :-)

nicely written!

it was good. Konan might've seemed ooc-ish, but she's not. I know exactly wat u were trying to say: She sounds ooc-ish in her mind because she would never really act like dat around Pein normally. Right? ,..

I liked it. ] I hope there's more. D

Nice! _

But don't Pein and Konan stay in the same room but in separate beds? Wouldn't Pein have heard her?

Maybe, Pein could've heard her, and taken that spot where she never goes and hug her. :o :P

hey:) ang cute ng storya. ang emo. hehehe :P it's so... mysterious (yahk). by the way, ano ang ooc? :)

I liked it! I mean i didn't think she was OOC I mean she never really said that in the anime or the magma but we all know she was thinking it!

please write more please please!

Hmm...

That was beautiful. Contemplative, too.

I'd once wrote something from Gaara's perspective that was also about the night, and not being able to sleep. Maybe I'll show it to you later on.

May I write a companion fic to this? I know you might have something planned, but I think I can pull it off. I await your reply.

Nice work.