this is a really really nice whump story! I love the happy ending! well written!thank you for sharing with us!

I've just gotta tell you this is the very best tag to Search and Rescue I've ever read. I was AMAZED to learn that you wrote this months BEFORE the episode aired! While I would never want to change the scenes of John rescuing Teyla, I would have very much loved to have seen YOUR version of the building implosion's immediate aftermath shown before the rescue!

Aww this was great. I thought it kinda stupid when Ronon had just yanked that piece of rebar out during that episode. It could'a caused all sorts of complications.
Once again, thank you and I loved your comment on your page stating that if you were in charge of SA that Sheppard would be whumped more often lol
Awesome!

Loved it!

Great read. Loved this more then the episode, though there are elements from both that could have made one humdinger of a episode. Like the whump done to John in your fic but him still being able to help save Teyla and her child.

I readed this story a long time ago, I think even before I came to the GW Shep whump thread, I did not know at the time the importance to review. But I'm a better person now:) and I appreciate the job writers do, not just for their own fun, but to give all of us a hell of a time. This is, I have to admit, one of my favorites S&R tags ever, 'cause I really enjoyed the way you develop John's suffering, so I came back to read it again.

Thank you very much.

Great job! Loved reading it. :)

Wow! You got it pretty close to the episode. I've just recently discovered your stories and am in the process of reading and loving them all. I hope you plan on continuing to write because your stuff is excellent. Please write again soon and I assure you I'll devour it and probably review. God bless you.

The typos are distracting. "it almost made he want to ball his fists" and "I have some impressive bruising and one or cuts but that’s about it." you forgot a word in this sentence. Please fix the typos it will make the story much better.

Seriously? How much is spoilers and how much is your brilliant yet twisted mind?

What a great story! Thank you so much.

how sweet :) and shameless ShepWhump, you simply GOT to love it!

aw... just damn beautiful... T_T

Here's hoping it happens this way!

I hope the whump is as good in the actual episode as it is here! Well done! :)