Is Edward the key-bearer? Will u do this chapter from another person point of view?

So bella in trouble?

No one notices she a girl?

Thanks for sharing

I don’t think the ending was very clear, nor was the part in the underworld(?)...a little more clarifying detail rather than pretty words in observation would make the last few chapters better. I dunno, just seems like the fight scenes and the pranks were so descriptive on actions that the last chapters got a bit confusing. I really loved this story though, and I stand by my statement that this would make an amazing movie.

I can imagine Edward staring at her at night, questioning if he’s gay because he likes Key xP

This would make such a great movie

Loved it! Thanks for sharing:-)

This is a great story...thank you for the journey!

I almost passed this story up because that has got to be one of the dumbest summaries ever. Edward vows to never let a woman on his boat...except his family...mostly...some of the time... lol
It just sounds like a really stupid vow to make, ive heard that some pirates believed it to be bad luck to have a woman on board, but that applies to ALL woman not just ones that aren't family. I mean who VOWS to never let MOST woman on board/?
dumbass

I absolutely love it!m

I love it.

awww that was romantic! :DDDD I'm really intrigued by this story!

I love this chap. it is sooooo funny
Your bedst chap. , the one wher she awlmost dead is god too

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Thank you! That's a great story! The carefree witty Bella of yours is incredible! Totally enjoyed it! Thank you for making my day with all the fun and fluff and wit!