| Reviews for Three Years and Two Weeks |
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Mary Reeves chapter 5 . 6/29 Just saw this and love your story. Do not know if you ever wrote more but would be greatly appreciate seeing more |
annasayshi1 chapter 1 . 9/22/2009 I was feeling sad the other day and came back to reread this story, and I just wanted to leave a quick review to say how much it cheered me up (despite making me cry) and how much I enjoyed it. You write these characters so well, and describe their reactions so convincingly, that it feels like having the show back again. I would really love to read more and see Danny and Mary catching up and Danny starting to move on. I don't want to hound you - I know people have lives :) But if and when you get the time, it would make me so happy to have more chapters (and eventually an ending) to read! |
twinklegura0503 chapter 5 . 9/21/2009 this is a fantastic story! i can see everything! you seemed to have nailed down each character's reactions, conversations , etc. it's perfect. it appears it's been a while since you were last on here but i would LOVE to see some additional chapters to this. i think you could take this story many different directions. this is a great way to calm the crave to wanting a decent ending to the series. i would love to see how ed could be worked into the story...althought i have a feeling you may already know how. ) thank you for sharing your story. look forward to future chapters. |
catgurl83 chapter 5 . 5/13/2009 I just found this story and really like it. Id love to see it finished. |
TruLuv chapter 5 . 3/22/2009 Oh my God, you absolutely have to update this story! I've fallen in love it, especially since Mary's returned. I've always been a Mary/Danny fan and I would love to see where you take this! Pretty please with a cherry on top, update again soon. |
annasayshi1 chapter 5 . 9/20/2008 Wow, this story is just amazing! The characters' emotions and expressions come across so well in your writing, it's like watching the show. You describe the situations beautifully - there were so many moments, especially in this chapter, when I was almost crying. And I like all the little moments between Danny and the other characters, and with his son: you really get the feeling of family. This is absolutely lovely, I'm really looking forward to reading more! |
WildfireLover chapter 5 . 9/3/2008 Its sad but really good! Can't wait for the next update! |
chamblau chapter 5 . 8/30/2008 This is one of my favorite stories. I can't wait until the next chapter is up. You can feel the emotions from all the characters and you bring their personalities to the story. Keep up the great writing. |
Jenmm31 chapter 5 . 8/21/2008 This is a great story! It's very well written. I love how Sam was at the mall, lol. Keep up the good work and update sonn! |
CheapChristmasTrash chapter 5 . 8/12/2008 This chapter was ever so good. I thought you captured the characters perfectly, and you conveyed Danny's grief and exhaustion very believably. It was incredibly sad, though, especially those scenes in the hospital - when I got to, "How could I ever give the baby away? It's Delinda's baby", I cried. All of it was so well written, and just heartbreaking. I liked that you had Sam come in to give Danny the talking to he needed - you got her brusque attitude just right, as well as showing just how much she cares about Danny and his son. And Jacoby is still adorable, even when he's having a tantrum :) I'm really enjoying this story, and I can't wait to read more. I have to say I prefer Mary and Danny as just friends, but either way I'm very interested to see how she fits in. |
ILoveObi-Wan chapter 5 . 8/9/2008 Can't tell you how much I love Danny and Jacoby. Danny's grief is very believable. My sister lost her husband a few years ago and I see a lot of her in Danny. Love that Mary and Danny are reunited. I wonder how you will handle the fact that she should still be wanted by the police? I have to admit I hope you don't go the romance route with Danny and Mary. I like then as best friends, not lovers. Then again if it's well written I will not complain. Hope for more soon! |
Lizzie1211 chapter 5 . 8/9/2008 Yeah, they finally meet again. I can't wait to see what you have in store for them. |
nbclasvegasfan chapter 5 . 8/6/2008 How Cute! I love that little boy lol. Great work, I can't wait to see how Jacoby reacts with Mary. Update soon. |
Sarcastickay001 chapter 4 . 7/17/2008 Aww, awesome story. A little sad on the first couple chapters but turned into an amazing story. Can't wait for the next update. :) |
SassySnow1988 chapter 4 . 7/14/2008 Hi there! First off I really like the direction you're taking this story. I am an adamant Danny-Mary fan, in fact I stopped watching the series entirely when Nikki Cox and James Caan left the show. I hate Danny-Delinda stuff so I would really love to see an update and how Danny will react to Mary returning, and how Mary was able to return w/o getting arrested. So update soon! Bye! Sassy18 |