the number of genin you mentioned being left doesn't work. it should be 75 not 76

This is a great story I love it I hope you update soon.

LOVE it, and I hope you update soon! W

great story hope to read more chapters soon

interesting

This story is interesting as well.. I am curious, why did you choose Madara as the bearer of the other eye? I wonder if Naruto's eye had existed before in the Shodai Hokage... Hmm..

I also noticed a typo early on in the chapter: "Everyone in the clearing felt a shiver run down their spine, a boy like Naruto giggling at the thought of mutilating someone was something that scared everyone in the room."

Note that last word. "Room" I believe everyone is actually outside at the time, in the Forest of Death.

If the Souseiki no Me is the Eye of Genesis, the Eye of Life, I would think it would clash badly with Kyuubi's Youki, not unlike if the Keiji no Me were in the same body.

I wonder, will Naruto be growing those tails permanently within the stated 3 weeks? That's certainly not gonna help his popularity in Konoha any.

Ah well, I do hope you decide to continue this story some day, but It would seem you have your hands full with many others as well.

brilliant, your story is really exciting! cant wait for the next chapter!

wow all the suspense over the pairing and its just another crappy NaruHina way to go hope it works out for you becuase now i've last a;; interest in this story.

Dude WTF does Naruto have Mpd because last chapter(Chap 1) he was all cold and shit and now in chap 2 hes back to being a pansy ass retard WTF is up with that!

That is pretty good! I like it! Please write more!

Insane naruto reminded me of Garra

awesome as hell.. plz update this one quickly

im the funny kid with the curly her LOL make garra say that

or temari LOL and let naruto get a kid like yondamie but in kid form

Nice chapter

I like your story so far great idea whit the eyes...

Hinatas personality is a great touch to, even thought i think you should have given stronger reasons why she did not interfere whit Narutos life.

How she come to Naruto before the 2nd exam you suggest that she to wears a mask. ;)

BTW plz don't turn naruto into half demon, that's would go again the hole idea of your story.

Since i think demons would have negative mana so or so no mater if they are good or bad.

Great work, keep it up. :)