WHOA. That was... a trip. While I realize this isn't gonna be finished... boy, howdy it would be great to have some kinda ending here.

Over the years since I first stumbled upon this story, it’s haunted me. It is so intense and beautifully written, and I’ve never seen anything else like it in the fandom since. You are a wonderful writer with amazing characterization and imagery. It has been 10 years since you posted/updated, so I doubt you will ever go back to finish this, but thank you for posing what you have so far. Have you ever written anything else? Or published? Are you on Tumblr? I would love to read more of your works. Amazing, amazing job!

This story is so good! I know it's old but would you ever consider doing another chapter if you even see this?

Why in the world did you stop there?! Four chapters tops and you'd probably be done. I cried at least twice during each chapter. Donnie is such a dick in this story. I'm scared to know what's happening with Mikey and that the lord for Leo. Raph has fallen apart and he is the only one there for his brother. THIS STORY IS SO SAD!
Since you didn't finish it & im still crossing my fingers that you pull throught and at least write one more chapter.. I am going to guess on what might possibly happen.
If things turned out good then that "ghost" they talked about in the last chapter was Raphs broken spirit then they would figure out how to get it back in Raphs broken body. That's why what Donnie put in Raph didn't work good and it took away parts of him. Then Mikey would come back injured but realize he messed up big time by leaving his broken family. Splinter would pass away peacefully and finally be reunited with his wife.
But if things turned out bad then Mike would get in big trouble almost dying, Donnie would try saving him but fail and almost die himself. This faliure really getting to dons head making things get worse and he would leave home forever. Splinter would die as well leaving Leo alone to care for Raph all by himself.
But that's just my guess on things. If live to hear how you wanted this story to play out.

Darn another really good story that isn't finished. I would love it if you did.

Please please please please update soon I want to know what will happen next. Thanks :)

Please please please update soon I'm dying to know what going to happen next. Thanks :)

Please please please update soon I want to see what happens next. Thanks

Update soon please thanks

Please update

Update soon please I really want see what happens next

Keep going please

Please continue

...normally I just shut up and wait for the updates, but 7 years is quite a while.

You dead bro?

Such a great fanfic.

My goodness, I caught this by accident from Tumblr and had to hungrily consume the entirety of the story. I hope someday there will be more.