very well done

Very good

I was completely enamored by the story and the way that you chose to present it; I loved the quirks and tidbits of the individuals. I can only hope that there will be more coming soon.

If they asked me if I would serve them, I would be like: "Why the hell would I be standing here if I didn't?"

Got to say, the thought of seeing an ATTEMPT on usagi's life, or at her arrest would have been fun to see.

Id have hated seeing it succeed though.

I know this story was written some time ago but I just ran across it today through a friend that had favorited it. I wanted to say thank you for writing it and let you know that I enjoyed reading it.

cool

Again: Too blunt. What I wrote to chapter 1 remains. You also might to give some reference to the Senshi's relations to the shitennou - people like me who just know the anime would not know how that came to pass.

Too blunt. The development reads unnatural and implausible. No family behaves like that. The revelation would have a much harder impact on everyone ... "Shattered" by Dejana Talis for example goes into the feelings of Tsukino Ikuko when she discovers the truth ..

You're dealing with Rei's father very strict here - you might want to look at "Spirit of Fire" by Heavenly Pearl. This one seems to deliver a plausible background to the history of Rei and her father ...

This story was great thanks for uploading it.

Mamoru is one of my favs. Thanks so much

LOVE IT

Your a great writer.

very good