Aaaww... It was so nice to read a good fanfiction. This ending wouldve been so much better... *u*

Oh, wow... I wish, you wouldve been working to square enix seven years ago... That game wouldve end they way it deserved... *_*

Good alternate ending. Very smoothly written.

You have done a fantastic job. This was written so beautifully. I truly enjoyed reading it.

~*lunaschild*~

Hey, nice story! Keep it up!

Loved it. That was very cute!

AW, so cute! I love this story. Balthier and Ashe make the best pairing.

Nice and fluffy, very good flow, you should seriously consider writing something longer, like a series.

So cute! I really enjoyed reading this beautiful story! The writing was very well-done and the story was adorable, too! Thanks for this great ending to FF12!