Awesome Story! can't wait to see what happens in the next story (update soon Plz)

I've read this book so many times and each time it gets better and better. You are a true inspiration and I hope that one day I could write as well as you.

Ahhh, you write so wonderfully.

Bravo! Loved it :D

Whoa... Wow. Well then. On I read :P

awesome... I love this fic a lot. I was hoping you would write a sequel to this. Thank you. Keep up the good job

This story was extremly captivating! I found that I was unable to walk a way. The character depth was right on! You have an amazing gift keep it up! I'm looking forward to reading more from you.

This story was extremly captivating! I found that I was unable to walk a way. The character depth was right on! You have an amazing gift keep it up! I'm looking forward to reading more from you.

YOU ARE AMAZING.

A very strong and captivating chapter once again.

The essence of the characters is so strong, I could just taste it. Skilfully done once again! I could dare say there are absolutely no flaws to this story.

This story is entrancing me more and more. You can't possibly imagine how I love it. Your skill in writing is indeed rare.

One of the things I love most about this story is that you are maturing Jack into what we all know him to be like with such smoothness, you can barely feel the changes. And yet they are there. Marvelous!

This story is one of the best I have ever read on . You manage to describe Dalma's world masterfully I love how you pay special attention to details and the way you describe them, not leaving anything out. Not her connection with nature, not her own thoughts, not her feelings for Jack.

As for our Captain, he is growing more and more to the Captain we know. You have made the transition without changing his essence and that is, in my eyes, a very big big plus.

I congratulate you!

When the idea to read a story about Jack and Tia Dalma occurred to me last night, I never thought I would find something this intense.

I am only on the first chapter and yet I already know this is going to be a fantastic ride. The way you capture the essence of both is unbelievable. Tia Dalma is such a mysterious character, and yet you manage to portray her with such a skill I can't express with words.

The abundance of images that come through my mind when I read your descriptions is limitless. It's like watching a mini series dedicated only for the two of them.

This is by far one of the greatest pieces I have read in my entire life. And when I say this, I include all of the books I've read, not just the fanfiction.

I foind myself entrapped in a spell now, I want to publish this fanfiction, print it out and carry it with me every where I go and turn back to it whenever I find the day growing dull.

Fantastic. Your command of the language, the imagery...you made me FEEL so much with this fanfiction...The fact that it's over makes me want to sob. I am delirious. This fanfiction shouldn't even be called a fanfiction, it really should be published and revered as one of the great classics of our time.

Just...Just wonderful. I envy your skill, I envy it so much I'm sure my skin is bound to turn green any minute now. Your writing just flows so well, the characters are fantastic. You managed to write Dalma, and the way that she speaks without destroying it like so many other writers do.

I resolve to never read another Jack x Tia Dalma fanfiction that isn't written by you. I don't think I'd be able to get through the first paragraph. Nothing can beat this in comparison.

I wish I could fave this story 10 billion times over. Still I don't think that would be enough.

You're making me want to read Dante, and Shakespeare (I don't even like Shakespeare much) and all the others you mentioned.

Agh, I can't describe just how hard this fanfiction hit me, you need a Pulitzer prize for this. I firmly believe that.

Fantastic work, keep up the EXCELLENT writing. You spoke of maybe another one? I'm begging you to write it, truly I am. I've always wondered and toyed with the idea of this pairing, but never have I seen it so wonderfully executed.

...I don't know what else to say or how else to praise you.

I'm in awe. I truly am. You are amazing, my writing is terrible in comparison. There is no doubt in my mind that you have been added to my favorite authors list. And not just on this site. Truly, honestly, fantastic work.

Please, please continue with this if you feel you can. I honestly believe you're the only person who can give this pairing justice.

You captured Jack, Teague, and Calypso so beautifully it hurts. And you brought out sides of them I'd never seen completely.

I have to say that of all the POTC fanfics I've read, this is without question my favorite.