Wonderful. Thanks for letting Yuugi squeeze the metaphorical life out of him. I needed that hug(s). Thanks for bringing him back. Just glad they got the chance to realize what they were going to miss.

Aargh! Why am I crying!? (So touching! /)

Aww... So cute!

Good story.

A very good story, congratulations.

I liked the thousand crane origami idea. You wrote the story very appealingly, and I enjoyed it. I like Yugi and Yami/Atem as a pairing, but I have to say that the friendship route did not disappoint. Well done, I'm sold. ;)

Hope you enjoy the rest of the week! Have fun . Mwha x

I absolutely LOVE this! I love it that you gave Yugi light magicas an opposite to shadow magic so he was able to bring Atemu back. Also love that Atemu's somewhat Yugi's older brother now.

Ahahaha awwww
Two days lol
Such a cute story :)
Great job

this was adorable and i loved it, thank you :)

Whoa, I loved this! It's such a sweet story, and it portrays well Yugi's and Atem's personalities as well as the bond they share. Plus, the ending gives me a warm, fuzzy feeling; it's kinda nice to see Atem reunited with Yugi without a) Yugi dying or b) Atem not going into the afterlife at all, having chosen to not seal away the dangerously powerful Millennium Items. It's a touching, well-done happily-ever-after. Great job!

luv this

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YES.

YES.

...I don't know why but I looovvveee this so much. I rarely comment on stories lately but I just felt the need to say;

OH MY GOODNESSSSS YEEEESSSSS.

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~Mossmask Out

a thousand paper cranes in two days? *whistles* now that's dedication.

;D,

brittney

...I want to go make paper cranes now. I hope you're happy. But other than that, beautiful story. I'll go check out your other fics now!

Oh wow! I really loved this! On a separate note, have you ever read TechnicolorNina's story, "A Thousand Paper Cranes"? It's the same idea, with a few OCs and a higher rating...I think I liked yours much better, though. And I love the idea that Yuugi has Light Magic. I always thought that Yami (or Atemu) couldn't have just been able to readjust to his status as Pharaoh in the Afterlife...which is why I'm more of a "Yami" fan...he's part Atemu AND part Yuugi...I know that sounds weird, but that's how I see it.

Great job!