I actually cried, and I usually don't do that on stories where no one actually dies. This is really well written, and the idea is very creative.. Nice job :)

This story... If you can make a girl cry in under 3000 words, that's... that's amazing. First, there was this girl writing a supernatural story, and she unconsciously stole my idea... and now you kinda did that... -.- It's whatevs. An idea's an idea.
This story... was godly. I loved this story just so... so much. I applauded on that last sentence, literally. This is just... words cannot describe how this... shocked my system (get it? Get it?)! :'DDD I'm so happy Klavi's alright!

wah! TTTT *almost brought to tears* that was so good

I'm glad it ended happily!

This is exactly how I picture their relationship to be. Or, at least, it's how I want it to end up. *shrug*

Beautiful. The emotion was good. You used a combo of dialogue and description for that, which is always good.

Yay you!

I love how well you illustrated their emotions with words. It was beautiful, thank you.

aw,i really liked it, haha especially the way you ended it, its creative (:

Hahah, I was the one who requested this XD I was REALLY happy to get it! :D And I'm glad to see it here

Different, but still good.

Wow, that was really good! Furthers my fear of motorcycles, haha.

Nice work!

I can only say... You're really good with this pairing! I love this story. Angsty but nice... It's... Wow, I'm speechless.

Oh, keep writing! We need more K/A! XD

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Yay! I saw this on the kink meme and loved it! Are you going to write a sequel?

wah poor klavier, he has stiches everywhere. how can you be so cruel to the bishi prosecuter? what is "G-gehn… dun do that"? aw poor apollo, he must be realy upset seeing klavier looking like that. aw I'm glad they are okay in the end.